Intercourse With A Porpoise Is A Dream For Me...Hell Bent On Inventing A New Species

[concubine18]

The sweetest feeling I got from you

Comments

[anonymous]

I know you know
I know you're real.
You cant control what you feel.
For anyone you should never alter,
yet my feelings dont seem to falter.

[concubine18]

Hmm this anonymous comment is intruiging... was it a quote or someones clever invention?

blue-such a lovely color for you

Hold on...

[anonymous]

Give credit where it is due....

the rhyme scheme of this poem is much bland, and real/feel alter/falter I mean, I know it's just a silly message board, but we can do better than ABAB. Also, what is the author really trying to say? Is he hungry? Maybe he needs some jingle-change

[anonymous]

I was an invention indeed.
But clever, I Know not.
I dont know much...
but do know that you're hot?

BLING BLING

[anonymous]

what exactly is being asked or question in that sentece to need a "?"

[chaucerboy]

Between the two of us, I could capitolize on misspelled words. (e.g. I, intruiging)

I'm Always A Strong & Upright Supporter

[anonymous]

When people are steadfast and true in their attempts to create a new species. Bravo to you, Carolyn and may all your hard work and dedication pay off one day! Ummm, yeah, so when you read this, if by some chance that you do, it should remind you to call me when you're overcast by boredom. YUM! Holy shit, I just realized who I just came back from seeing THE PIXIES!! Good Concert. Also, when/if you give me a call, remind me about the idea of trading massages. It just sounds like way too clever of an idea.

-Miles

PS-It seems as though others are giving you sweet nothings, so I must plan a great grand scheme of sweet nothings...

Re: I'm Always A Strong & Upright Supporter

[concubine18]

Thank you sir Miles...The Pixies...whatever happened to Cake? Swarmed with jealousy. yeh im not to sure who these messages are from..but its interesting to see..haha who mentioned this massafe thing? Im lost..anyways have a good night and take care... Ill call you sometime soon hopefully, but probably not today...(tuesday) bc Ihave lots of dumb things I have to get done.

You accost my response, so here it is

[chaucerboy]

I am sorry my poetry doesnt please you, Miles? If it were up to your sir, what would you have me write? a Sonnet? Would you like that in Yeats style, or shakespearian? How about Iambic Pantameter? Hell..a Hiaku? What is the point of using complex STRUCTURES when one is trying to express one's self? If different words had came to me at the time...it would have formed to a different structure...but I do not bind myself to a given structure...or from one for that would narrow my scope, and ultimately change my expression. Impressing people isnt my goal... But information in a fun way is.

Re: You accost my response, so here it is

[concubine18]

I dont think Miles even once mentioned your poems...

oops

[chaucerboy]

I just reread that, and it sounds semi-hostile, but it really wasnt supposed to be. I wrote it it in the wee hours of the morning.