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Thank You for Breaking My Heart (Part 1)

Oct 16, 2014 12:00

Title: Thank You For Breaking My Heart
Author: Concupid
Pairing: Howard/Vince
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Bob Fossil making homophobic comments in English AND English
Summary: The first time Howard breaks Vince’s heart.
Author’s note: Maybe two years ago, Bluey mentioned the idea of a Boosh fic based on Ben Folds Five “Thank You for Breaking My Heart ( Read more... )

pg-13, howard/vince, fanfic, thank you for breaking my heart, pre-slash, the mighty boosh, angst

Comments 7

life_downsized October 16 2014, 21:32:32 UTC

Really loved this fic. One problem though. Where's the ending? I'm sure you just missed it off by mistake but you need some sort of romantic, loving fluff to tie this all together otherwise it just doesn't work.

(WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS TO ME I THOUGHT WE WERE FRIENDS?!)

*ahem*

But yeah otherwise really good...

concupiscence66 October 16 2014, 21:49:57 UTC

It's a story about the bumps and bruises in life that make you stronger. Sometimes it's a hiccup in a budding friendship, sometimes it's a crushing blow that stomps on your heart.

Guess what the next chapter will be?

ideserveyou October 16 2014, 21:45:05 UTC

Awww, this is so sweet and sad and lovely - and then you add in Bob Fossil and the tears turn to hysterical laughter because you've got his voice just perfectly - and then you make it all sweet and sad and lovely again... You are an evil genius and I love this story!

concupiscence66 October 16 2014, 21:52:23 UTC

It is a fact that Bob Fossil accurately represents American culture.

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concupiscence66 October 17 2014, 22:41:37 UTC

While I do plan on a lot of hearbreak, but they will work through it and better for it. It is a happy story about heart break!

bluestocking79 October 17 2014, 05:13:48 UTC

Eeeeeeeeee, thank you! I need to say that first. Because that song was on my mind yesterday and I was remembering that conversation, and then today--! I have often felt you are psychic, but you might actually in fact be psychic. :D ( ... )

concupiscence66 October 17 2014, 23:04:55 UTC

I planned my morning around your review. I dropped the Vincess off at school and went to the Y to relax with a cup of tea and your review before working out.

So I am happy to make you happy! I have been thinking of another story for a while but I couldn't figure out the set up and then imashambles dropped it into my hands! It was so easy to see them as a couple of awkward teens but Howard seeing himself as so very mature.

I remember being young and thinking that I would like any guy who liked me because I was so desperate for someone to think I was special. Of course, it doesn't work like that! You can't force those feelings.

Vince's poor boots. He's learning that if you want something to last, it takes a bigger investment than something temporary. Message!