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ideserveyou February 1 2013, 17:42:50 UTC
Wowee, that was hot! And touching, and funny, and all things that are good... Howard tonguing Vince's bellybutton for an audience is another fabulous sexy image, and the sex at the end is just lovely, I don't know how you manage to go on making it so original and awkward and hilarious and so very much in character for both of them.

And it is so typical of Howard that he would wait for the exact moment Vince turned 16 before making a move on him, however much he wanted to...

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concupiscence66 February 1 2013, 17:49:46 UTC
The belly-button play was specifically for you...

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ideserveyou February 1 2013, 18:14:53 UTC
I did wonder whether it might be - I do have a bit of a weakness for bellybuttons. Thank you very much indeed, it was much appreciated and will be re-read and enjoyed many times over!

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bluestocking79 March 9 2013, 06:27:06 UTC
I really, really, really love this chapter. Scorching hot and sexy, yes, but also very sweet and tender and insightful--the kind of emotional underpinning that makes the sex so much hotter and more powerful. And the bits of humor in here (like the brilliant 'aardvark umbrella' exchange) and perfect and funny and so very fitting for these two. No matter how their relationship changes, that dynamic will always be there.

Vince wasn't wet behind the ears, he was soaked. He was a complete innocent with no common sense. Howard wanted to talk to Vince's parents and find out why they were letting their son dress like a rent boy and chase nearly grown men on the tube.This is another one of those sections of the story that touches me, every single time I read it, and that whole flashback of Howard's is one of my favorite sections of the story, as his fantasy of Vince-the-knowing-Lolita crashes right into the reality that Vince is actually just an innocent playing at something that could get him in WAY over his head. I think I love it so much ( ... )

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