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Vanishing Act

Jul 30, 2009 23:57

Vanishing Act
G; SHINee-Ontae; Angst; nudge
The ends come away like ashes in his palms.

note for ghostdrop. she gave me this as a prompt. D:

( Vanishing Act )

pairing: onew/taemin, fandom: shinee, #au, #flashfic

Comments 46

................................. ghostdrop July 30 2009, 16:05:57 UTC

you lied to me

ghostdrop July 30 2009, 16:07:23 UTC

nudge July 30 2009, 16:08:51 UTC

r u exasperated

ghostdrop July 30 2009, 16:16:07 UTC

yez

ghostdrop July 30 2009, 16:14:37 UTC

conditionally August 1 2009, 07:41:06 UTC

YOU AMUSE ME SO MUCH WITH YOUR ICONS ♥

ghostdrop August 1 2009, 07:50:41 UTC

SPONGEBOB IS OSM Y/Y? 8D
i only have 6 icon spaces, i must utilise them efficiently!

conditionally August 1 2009, 08:00:20 UTC

YES 8D SO IS FLAPJACK AND CHOWDER AND EVERYTHING ELSE AMAZING

/gasp/ ONLY SIX. Woman how do you live with yourself.

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ghostdrop July 30 2009, 16:14:49 UTC

i can't even find my heart anymore it got incinerated

He turns on his side and tries to sleep, and wonders if this is a cruel, sick blessing-God's way of letting him watch Taemin's slow, even breathing even while his eyes are closed.
my favourite part but the ending whyyyyyyyyy ajsdfl

;__________; why is this so good
why do you not write more ontae

can i quote the entire fic in this comment everything is so perfect

i'm torn between total admiration/being really angry because i wished i wouldda thought of this first/being really really really really jealous of your skillz

but after this you have to write ice cream ontae to heal my heart ok i can't believe you are making me go to my math exam tomorrow with this in my mindz

nudge July 30 2009, 16:17:35 UTC

i donut write ontae b/c it r strange! i told u alr a retard + a serial killar!

i honestly tink u r painting a picture of my skillz dat r not rly there... liek onews eyelids lol

u r so much better /fangirls

ghostdrop July 30 2009, 16:23:26 UTC

but a retard + a serial killar that is like jaesu
junsue is da serial killar and jaejoong is da retard
and i know u like jaesu so no excuse

and honestly i tink u tink wrong

when i fail tomorrow i will b liek "it is juballs fault she killed da ontae"

;;___________________________;;;; /rereads 4eva

conditionally July 30 2009, 16:17:34 UTC

WHAT THE FUCK JO

conditionally July 30 2009, 16:21:14 UTC

despite the various WTFCKERY of this entire piece, I really did like it and dawwww I miss your writing, write more you bad influence of an unni :||

They talk about the vanishing for a while to get it out of the way before they move on to things that matter, like recurring dreams or how marshmallows are made.

CUTEST THING EVER ;A; ♥