Vanishing Act

[nudge]

Vanishing Act
G; SHINee-Ontae; Angst; nudge
The ends come away like ashes in his palms.

note for ghostdrop. she gave me this as a prompt. D:

Comments

[premonitioner]

TOTALLY SADFACING OMG THAT WAS SO TOUCHING ;___;

[scylladakylla]

OH MY GOD, THE ENDING. DDDD: WHY, OH WHY. ;_____;

Taemin curls his fingers in Jinki's hair. The ends come away like ashes in his palms.
Oh, that image is so pretty and heartbreaking.

This is so depressing. D: D: D:

[heechul_oppa]

........you make me sad that I love this omfg because ;oaijdlksdf WHUT. Onew. DDDDDDD:

But guh. I absolutely adore your writing style. Seriously. It's so relaxed and easy and somewhat dream-like. Like...instead of something melodramatic or overly emotion-laden, you wrote this from an uninvolved third party, calmly relaying a story, and yet it still managaes to break my heart. oi;ajlsd. I am so speechless.

Oh. And OnTae is, like, my OTP4lyf, but. LOL. ;~; It seems so irrelevant next to my love for this fic.

[phasera]

EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS MAKES ME WANT TO DIE.

;____;♥

FUCK IT'S SO FUCKING AMAZING I CAN'T HATE YOU BUT OMFG WHY DON'T YOU WRITE MORE. SOBBING FOREVER.

[todefinebeauty]

sobbing I love everything about this fic ♥♥♥ I don't even know where to begin. Onew disappearing, and his eyelids, and his hair omg why. This was so lovely and beautiful and my heart, it is broken. *mems forever*