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confidantes

in which vee is late with everything;

Jul 26, 2011 00:32

"Careful with your fingers! Don't touch writing! You don't know what it is to write. It's a crushing task; it bends your spine, blurs your eyesight, creases your stomach, and cracks your ribs." (source)

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fallen_chan July 26 2011, 06:12:55 UTC

g;kljfh. just. wow.

I love the structure - starting out with Hibari and Gokudera and then going back to expand on how it happened (and oh Yamamoto; i wonder if he knew what his favor would result in) and then ending with just Hibari and Gokudera - and i love that their relationship is set against the backdrop of life after TYL!Tsuna's death and incorporates the element of tragedy inherent in all their lives after that event without actually drowning out the fact that they managed to build a relationship amidst the ruins of their family.

"I've been trying to avenge one death for fifteen years" <- this line killed me, it really did.

i'm babbling. this really was an amazing fic though. and I'm shutting up now.

confidantes July 26 2011, 18:45:57 UTC

uwa~~ thank you ;_; lol, i was actually quite worried about this fic because it turned out to be mostly hibari and gokudera talking/arguing with no discernible plot whatsoever, and i was all, "that can't be very good. >_>" but i'm glad you liked it! xD

fallen_chan July 27 2011, 06:09:31 UTC

♥ ♥ ♥

there was totally discernible plot! it just skipped backwards in time and then forwards again is this making any sense to you?

confidantes July 27 2011, 07:08:19 UTC

lol, no, that totally made sense! xD i hope that wasn't too confusing, the skipping back and forth. i tend to write that way because i find writing in a completely chronological order is kind of boring, and plus, kurt vonnegut (aka my literary hero *__*) recommends starting the story as close to the end as possible. xD

anyway~ i tend to refer to some of my fics/stories as "plotless" because a lot of them are just composed of people talking, lol. and i guess it's just that i see plot as something different? like, there's an obvious beginning and end, but not something you can put simply in the terms of "A happened, then B happened, and therefore C happened." i dunno~ >_< /is babbling xD

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confidantes July 30 2011, 08:28:14 UTC

YES, I DID, I SHOWED YOU LIKE SNIPPETS. AND IT CHANGED DRASTICALLY FROM WHAT IT WAS SUPPOSED TO BE ORIGINALLY, OOPS. xD

i'm glad you liked it, though~~ :D i will try my best to keep churning out 1859 fic for your pleasure, trololol. ♥

OMGOSH, that is beautiful. :'D and yes, i see the 1859-ness. :D