Iron Man 3 Fic (rife with spoilers!): Safe

May 14, 2013 23:46

I think even the summary/characters are a bit spoilery, so all info is behind the cut:

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enigmaticblues May 15 2013, 13:35:01 UTC
I love this. :-)

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confusedkayt May 18 2013, 03:23:09 UTC
Hooray! I am super glad. Also your Bruce icon is making me happy. :)

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mithen May 16 2013, 01:41:40 UTC
Oh my goodness, you capture RDJ's Tony so well, the physical tics and mannerisms and voice, all of it. His mouth jerks left, his eyes right, I can see that so clearly.

Bruce would resent it but Pepper and Rhodes have long since lost the trick of listening with only half an ear when Tony's saying something real even when that's what Tony wants - needs, really, would be a good way of putting it.

Ahhhh, yes.

Tony's face does that complicated origami that means he's freaked out and flattered and trying really hard to pretend he doesn't have any setting other than flippant.

Oh my goodness, that's amazing. This all is, I love it. *beams*

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confusedkayt May 18 2013, 13:35:05 UTC
Hooray! I cannot help but feel that the cat in your icon is a good role model for Bruce Banner. :)

RDJ is such a kinetic Tony! I'm super glad that comes through off the page, because his funny little "oh no! Emotions immanent!" faces are one of my fave things about the movies!

And I felt so bad about poor Bruce being a sleepy jerk in the post credits scene until I thought about why for a while, and that Tony did not seem too rattled by same. I love little snippets that beg for explanation!

Hooray, hooray! As always, your thorough comments are such a force for encouragement (which is not intended as emotional blackmail- meep!) But it's so kind of you and very much appreciated!

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lyrstzha May 20 2013, 11:22:44 UTC
Oh, those are really awesome voices - very them. I can so see this as an extension of the frame of the movie.

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confusedkayt May 24 2013, 02:37:15 UTC
Hooray! I am super glad that you liked the voices! I was kind of trying to get my hand back in on voices with this little ficlet. RDJ's Tony is so... distinct. I really enjoyed writing this. Thanks much for commenting!

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