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Oct 12, 2005 18:21
The Warrior (
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ultimademonxi
October 13 2005, 05:46:23 UTC
not bad at all, only issue i had with it if any is the iambic pentameter is a little off in the first stanza. good other than that.
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confuzedlozer
October 13 2005, 05:51:23 UTC
iambic pentameter? what in the world is that?
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geekgirl
October 13 2005, 14:59:54 UTC
ummm..interesting.
the last thing you wrote about "this is probably the best i have written" reminds me of when napoleon draws the picture of trisha. lol
i do think you were a warrior in another life. :)
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the last thing you wrote about "this is probably the best i have written" reminds me of when napoleon draws the picture of trisha. lol
i do think you were a warrior in another life. :)
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