Silence

[connaissance]

Er, yes, well, too much silence is bad for my soul.
I suppose it's time for bad poetry again.

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New Version

[connaissance]

Well, this edit requires a comment on the post, as I think it distinctly changes the feel of a line... Regardless, here's another version of the poem.

Silence reigns, shadows walk,
and the echoes weep,
eternally forgotten,
abandoned to their sleep.

Rise now, oh cacophony,
and shatter echoes slumber,
rise now, oh dissonance,
and break the dawn asunder.

So tell me which one you all like better.
Raz

Re: New Version

[hopeevey]

The second one. It gives me goosebumps

Re: New Version

[monmouth]

I agree. This one :)