Ohsweetjesusandallthatisholy I don't know if I've commented before... I don't think I have... I remember reading the first chapter of this... But then I think I forgot about it... Saw it updated on MCS and I was like "Holyshit!" Lol. So here I am, read all the chapters in one go and am now commeting.
I luuuuurve this. Lots and lots. It's so different. I love how you incorperate the Panic! song into the story and make it so... Glamorous. Addicting. Enticing. Magnificent. Iniquitous. Alluring.... Sexy. Agh! It’s all of that rolled into one. It's so good. So so so good. Mhmm.
I just... Ugh. I'm at loss for words. Haha.
I love how you use so many characters in your story. From the main ones like Frank, Mikey, Gerard, Sonny, Bert, etc. To even Hayley, William, Adam, Matt, Pete, Quinn, etc. I'm kinda sad that Ray and Bob don't get all that much mentioning... But that's okay, cause at least they're in there, period. Your story is just a big happy party of people from all over the place... Having orgiesLol
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O.O That's one hell of a comment! I loved your feedback! I'm always really happy when people read into the characters on a deeper than just face-value way.
And oh GOD, French Sonny, i know... I have absolutely no idea why i decided to make him French, it did seem a good idea at the time. I do love him though XD
Frankie will get a clue-in soon enough. You think i'd just let him be a prostitute and not give him a taste of the real gritty side of it - HELL NO! But i'll say no more here...
Mikey's a lovely character to write about, because there's a lot about him which is hidden. In the rest of the story his true nature will come out to you, so i hope you'll enjoy reading how strange he really is.
Wow... I just did a skim over my own previous comment and my eyes kind of bugged out of my head too. Lol.
You better get used to it though. I'm always leaving novel sized comments on stories. Especially if I really really like them. I like details... And I like to point out details and every little tiny thing I like. I think it might be my mild OCD side showing. Lol.
Sorry if I made you have a serious brain overload with that comment though... That one was a bit longer then my usual comments. Haha.
I just now read this whoooole thing in the space of about three hours and I must say...I LOVE YOU.
This story, everything about it, is nothing short of fantastic. The detail about everything from the club to the boys and girls to the clients to everyone's inner thoughts and feelings is beautiful. The way you create characters and situations is incredible, I don't think I have that much inspiration in my whole body as you seem to have in your little finger. I love the suspense, and the sex, and the detail, and the sweetness, and the relationships between everyone, and the dialouge, and the french sprinkled in and...everything.
And I must say that I have never so badly wanted to be a prostitute. :D
Uhm and yes, the suspense may kill me so, no pressure but, update soon?? :)))
Urg, poor Matt. Kinda. Of course I would've probably done the same thing with a gun to my head and Adam in my face. >p
I luuuuuurve new readers. I'm really happy you're enjoying it so far - i love writing it, but it needs inspiration to work out. I tend to write this only when i'm feeling in a very analytical mood, because i describe as much as possible when in that mindset. And i think this story wouldn't work without detail :)
The next update may take awhile, slap bang in the middle of my exams you see, but i'll squeeze in some time to write somewhere :) The next chapter isn't very long anyways, and the ending of it is already written.
Gerard blows me away. He's written perfectly. So dark and powerfull, but with weak spots. This may be one of the only stories where I can appreciate the pairing Bert/Gerard. And I'm so curious if Frank will get a sexy name as well. Will look forward to the next
Poor Matt. I know Gerard's mad, but would he have said no to a man he acknowledges is the most dangerous man in town? Especially if he has a gun to your head?
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I don't know if I've commented before...
I don't think I have...
I remember reading the first chapter of this... But then I think I forgot about it...
Saw it updated on MCS and I was like "Holyshit!"
Lol.
So here I am, read all the chapters in one go and am now commeting.
I luuuuurve this.
Lots and lots.
It's so different.
I love how you incorperate the Panic! song into the story and make it so...
Glamorous. Addicting. Enticing. Magnificent. Iniquitous. Alluring.... Sexy.
Agh!
It’s all of that rolled into one.
It's so good.
So so so good.
Mhmm.
I just...
Ugh. I'm at loss for words.
Haha.
I love how you use so many characters in your story.
From the main ones like Frank, Mikey, Gerard, Sonny, Bert, etc.
To even Hayley, William, Adam, Matt, Pete, Quinn, etc.
I'm kinda sad that Ray and Bob don't get all that much mentioning...
But that's okay, cause at least they're in there, period.
Your story is just a big happy party of people from all over the place...
Having orgiesLol ( ... )
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That's one hell of a comment!
I loved your feedback! I'm always really happy when people read into the characters on a deeper than just face-value way.
And oh GOD, French Sonny, i know... I have absolutely no idea why i decided to make him French, it did seem a good idea at the time. I do love him though XD
Frankie will get a clue-in soon enough. You think i'd just let him be a prostitute and not give him a taste of the real gritty side of it - HELL NO! But i'll say no more here...
Mikey's a lovely character to write about, because there's a lot about him which is hidden. In the rest of the story his true nature will come out to you, so i hope you'll enjoy reading how strange he really is.
Thanks for reading! :) x
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I just did a skim over my own previous comment and my eyes kind of bugged out of my head too.
Lol.
You better get used to it though.
I'm always leaving novel sized comments on stories.
Especially if I really really like them.
I like details...
And I like to point out details and every little tiny thing I like.
I think it might be my mild OCD side showing. Lol.
Sorry if I made you have a serious brain overload with that comment though...
That one was a bit longer then my usual comments.
Haha.
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Holy. Shit.
I just now read this whoooole thing in the space of about three hours and I must say...I LOVE YOU.
This story, everything about it, is nothing short of fantastic. The detail about everything from the club to the boys and girls to the clients to everyone's inner thoughts and feelings is beautiful. The way you create characters and situations is incredible, I don't think I have that much inspiration in my whole body as you seem to have in your little finger. I love the suspense, and the sex, and the detail, and the sweetness, and the relationships between everyone, and the dialouge, and the french sprinkled in and...everything.
And I must say that I have never so badly wanted to be a prostitute. :D
Uhm and yes, the suspense may kill me so, no pressure but, update soon?? :)))
Urg, poor Matt. Kinda. Of course I would've probably done the same thing with a gun to my head and Adam in my face. >p
fgsfds.
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The next update may take awhile, slap bang in the middle of my exams you see, but i'll squeeze in some time to write somewhere :) The next chapter isn't very long anyways, and the ending of it is already written.
Hope you come back, xx
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But yes, I'll be sure to be here when you next update!!
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Poor Matt. I know Gerard's mad, but would he have said no to a man he acknowledges is the most dangerous man in town? Especially if he has a gun to your head?
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