Comments | constantmuse: Raffles fic: Le premier pas, bis.

constantmuse

Raffles fic: Le premier pas, bis.

Oct 29, 2009 20:32

This was the first fic I ever posted anywhere, and I was so shy I only posted it to my own lj. After some revision, I'm reposting it now to put up at crimeandcricket.

( Pearls by candlelight )

Comments 9

violetjimjams October 29 2009, 21:37:36 UTC

I love you.

Giant stamp of approval on Raffles adorning Bunny in their loot (wanting to see that since entering the fandom), and for considerate, conensual lovemaking after the fact.

*sents luv your way*

constantmuse October 30 2009, 23:17:05 UTC

Thank you!

"wanting to see that since entering the fandom" bit of a kink there? was I right to avoid earrings? (quite fancied Bunny in pearl drop earrings, but didn't want to get too effeminate).

violetjimjams October 31 2009, 00:50:43 UTC

Only if they had clip ons back then. But I really can't see Bunbun in earrings unless he's also in a bit of silk loincloth.

...and no, I haven't been having AU harem fantasies, and I'll thank you not to suggest such a thing.

storyfan October 29 2009, 22:17:19 UTC

So many excellent lines and I loved the imagery of Bunny draped in the finest jewels.

These lines are golden: “My Bunny, my dear little rabbit”, he murmured, “You do not need these adornments, you are quite perfect without them, but they do look dashed fine…”.

As this is hilarious: “Good point, Bunny, we may need to pull off some minor adventures, from time to time, just to keep our hands in, or our peckers up, or what have you…"

Good show.

constantmuse October 30 2009, 23:17:47 UTC

Thank you, glad you were amused.

janeturenne October 29 2009, 23:35:11 UTC

The image of Bunny all over diamonds and pearls is positively marvelous :) And I love that Raffles has found the secret weapon to make Bunny WANT to pull more heists!

constantmuse October 30 2009, 23:19:52 UTC

Thank you! I'm not at all scheming, I just saw Raffles indulging himself there. And Bunny dserves to be made a fuss of.

ajs_bunny October 30 2009, 04:05:29 UTC

Oh, lovely! I added it to the fanfic section of the site.

And yes! I can completely see Raffles dressing his Bunny up in all that glitter and glam. Better yet, I can visualise the young and dapper Valentine and Strauli in this scene--which makes me v.v. naughty, indeed!

constantmuse October 30 2009, 23:20:40 UTC

Oh good, I'm glad you got it and thank you very much for adding it to your list!