Nameless

[evil_queen369]

Author: evil_queen369
Genre: Angst, Horror, Gore, Smut
Fandom: Nega
Pairings: Ray/San
Rating: NC-17 - R
Warnings: Smut, torture
Chapter: 3/??
Synopsis: “Who lives there?” Behind a large gate was a giant off-white mansion much bigger than Yuu’s. From the front alone twenty-six windows could be seen, all in which were decorated with white curtains. Outside was a

Comments

[pumpkindollluv]

I like it! Good job :)

[evil_queen369]

Thanks, dear!

[ladyrevania]

The descriptions of the house bored me a bit, you could create some more suspense using these I think. I drowned in all these details and it was a bit hard to imagine everything... but it may be because I'm a "straight to the point", simple thinking person XD

I'm really curious what will happen to Jin and what Ray will do... and I can feel your pain, I've been suffering from writer's block for almost one year. I'm still trying to write something, but I just... can't.

[evil_queen369]

Ah, yes, I actually feel the same! I wrote the house details a couple months ago with the intent of doing something with them, but as my writer's block grew I didn't know what to do. Eventually I'll edit this chapter to make it better.

I have a vague idea of what to do with Ray and Jin, but there may be another long gap before I update. Everything I've posted with writer's block just feels as if it's lacking, so I'm very disappointed win my work lately. (T ^ T)

[ladyrevania]

It's okay, update when you feel like writing, don't force yourself. I understand it better than you think ;)

[vampire_kiki]

great chapter!!! carry on!

[evil_queen369]

Thank you, hun!!

[kasleigh1]

Alright, I'm a lurker coming forward, Lol ^^
I love when people give descriptions of the surroundings, though I felt a little over whelmed with how detailed it was (though I feel I'm not one to talk)
I love how tense it was towards the end, heart pound.
I really like this story so far and rather enjoy reading your work, you're a really good writer ^^
I can't wait for more, though I hope you don't push against your writers block to hard. I know from experience from fighting it stories tend to go sour and become uninteresting if you push so hard.

[evil_queen369]

Wah~ Hello, dear! :)

I agree about the description. As I said in another comment, I initially had the intent to do something with them, but my writer's block got so bad that I failed miserably. ^^;

Thank you, doll~ ♥ It makes me feel so delighted when a reader tells me they enjoy my work. ♥

I'll try not to. I don't want this story to become uninteresting because it's finally something different then what I usually write, and I would really like to keep this going until the end. :)

Thank you for your comment, dear! ^__^

[kasleigh1]

You're so welcome ^^