Author:
evil_queen369Genre: Smut
Fandom: D
Pairings: Hide-Zou/Tsunehito
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Sex
Chapter: 1/1
Synopsis: On Halloween, most kids would be out trick or treating and dressed in costumes that appeared scary to them: witches, vampires, ghosts, and some kids were fairy princesses (and just begging to get their candy stolen). They’d run door to
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Tsune and Hide-zou are love in this. And the characterisation of the others is really good too :3
Don't witty, I have trouble writing smut too. D;
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First of all, great job!
I really liked the pairing, it was the first time for me to read a fic with this pairing. Tsune and Hide-Zou wouldn't be the first ones in my mind if I had to create pairings from D. ......except now. :D
I just loved the way Tsune was so ... bitchy, somewhat. :D Playing and still not playing with Zou's feelings. They were cute.
I thinks this didn't go forward too fast even though it was kinda short. Maybe a little finetuning would be okay if you think you rushed. ^^;
lol the moment when those two got caught. :DD "So you just decided to watch?!" haha, oh boy and joy. :'D
And yeah, I can feel you when it comes to writing smut. So much to think about and somehow I feel it's unnatural even though I can almost see everything in my mind.
Thank you for this. ^--^ I'll promise to come back and comment one of your other fics, too. ~
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Actually, this story was Asagi/Tsunehito when I first started, but I ended up changing it because it seemed weird. ^^;
Smut is so hard to write! I can easily picture in my mind and I can even rp it, but for the life of me I can't write it in a story. It feels so weird, and I blush too much. xD
You're welcome, and I hope you enjoy my other stories as well!
And I apologize for taking so long to reply. ^^;
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Lol Tsunehito prancing around without any underwear. Oh well, easy access for Hide-Zou! I'm sure he won't complain
Did you know the link to your fanfic archive isn't working? Tried to click on it a couple times and no luck...
I need D icons now
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