Journal Entry 3.1

[conundrum82]

I don't really have too much time at the moment to explain anything about this other than I just finished writing it a minute or two ago. I plan on it being a series of songs that will tell stories, ideas, feelings, etc. that I have with the album title "Tales from the tape". All of this will make sense when I get a chance tonight or tomorrow to

Comments

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[mustangkelley]

Well my personal opinion is that it's good. I like how you managed to convey your sense of emotion into symbolism and actually tell a story with inanimate objects conveying emotions. Its a very smart way to do it and is also a very hard way to write. I have not yet gotten to that. I can only explain emotions with other feelings not with symbolism so more power to you. :)

[babyziggyblues]

BEAUTIFUL!
Through a world full of dark questions, helplessness, alone, crowded, and pain seeming to be everywhere you look, yet you still provide the truth of an unknown light at the end. Simply and magnificently BEAUTIFUL! The thought that I have come so close to denying myself the great honor of witnessing that light brings tears to my eyes even at this very moment!
I fully believe that people go through experiences not matter how earth shattering, for a reason! What a great testimony and responsibility it is to those who wait to be witnesses of what that light holds. For if this knowledge of a light at the end of a long dark tunnel is not passed down, who then is truly responsible for those of us who never make it that far?

[lvingdeadgirl14]

Kev! If you were here I'd punch your arm! Why didn't you tell me you were such a good song writer?! Your lyrics are really catchy and good and I haven't even heard the music - did you write the songs when I used to go to Rodney's? I don't think so, right? 'Cause this is good (no offense to whoever wrote those songs but...)

I especially enjoyed the first two verses - they really caught my attention and made me reflect on things a.k.a. I could identify. Maybe not the way it's meant to be identified with but they say if you can find something within the song that suits you, then it's a good song.

Long and short, I hope you put up more lyrics soon and when you do cut something I wanna hear!