Journal Entry 5.1

[conundrum82]

So, today has been an uneventful day, thank god. I've needed at least half a day to myself to collect my thoughts and move on to all the tasks at hand. One of those tasks is tempering my song. I have an idea for an edit to verse one, tell me what you all think

Comments

[wonderland218]

I hadn't gotten a chance to read your song until now, but I promised that once I did read it I would comment. So here's what I think:
1)It's message is good. I can relate to your words, which is very important to me in a song, and the way they're written is simple yet full of emotion. But then again, so are you.
2)You should be proud, not only for writing something, but for putting the lyrics in your LJ. If I had written something, I don't think I would've had the balls to post my own lyrics. Then again, I've never written anything like what you've written.
I applaud you.

[lvingdeadgirl14]

I think I like After better - also 'may he hold you in his hand' sounds dirty to me - I know what you meant by it, but you see, I'm a pervert.