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Aug 07, 2004 16:11

scrutinize; demoralize
every step i take
generalize
every statement that i make

disqualify
all emotions i posses
magnify
what makes me less than best

if i keep spinning around
will i ever disappear?
can't keep myself bound
i've left for you my tears
i've left for you my sound
freedom from the fear

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gusteris4lovers August 7 2004, 22:47:11 UTC
dont forget me!

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convoke August 8 2004, 00:18:20 UTC
added

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anonymous August 8 2004, 03:30:12 UTC
love it

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convoke August 8 2004, 03:37:26 UTC
why thank you anonymous commenter!

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msanachronistic August 8 2004, 13:30:28 UTC
excellent poem. great flow, good job.

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convoke August 8 2004, 13:37:30 UTC
thank you so much. do i know you?? i see your a friend of jakes...

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_zer0cool_ August 8 2004, 14:21:33 UTC
i like that a lot!

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convoke August 8 2004, 14:25:38 UTC
i like you.

mama said knock you out

i'm gon' knock you out

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in_sideout August 8 2004, 15:55:19 UTC
I love the poem...Add me Annie!!!!!!!

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convoke August 8 2004, 16:27:27 UTC
bunniez!

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