Reconquista (5/5)

[coolbreeze1]

Comments

[roo1965]

Phew , what a rollercoaster. john's in and out as he recovers was very believeable and the whole team effort was wonderful. great Ronon and Rodney banter about the cruise etc- just what John needs to recover- the normal stuff his team do...

[coolbreeze1]

Thank you! I wanted to really show how difficult and long the recovery would be, and how serious his injury was. I'm glad you enjoyed the story! Thank you so much for your comments along the way!

[admiralandrea]

Wow, this is a great fic - a real ride. I like the way you cut back and forth. And yay Ronon for being a kickass lawyer! Plus, the ending, with the bickering about the cruise was priceless *g*

Great stuff, thanks!

[coolbreeze1]

Thank you! Glad the back-and-forth structure worked and wasn't confusing. I was worried about that!

[sgafan]

I was so glad to help! Already told you how much I liked many different parts of this story, but it bears repeating

[coolbreeze1]

Thank you again!! Your comments were so helpful pulling this all together and making sure each section flowed and was clear. I'm really happy with the end results here, even as difficult as the story was to write. It was a great learning experience and forced me to try what I might not have attempted otherwise. Yay for prompts!!

[loobilou]

Wow! That was a fabulous read!

If only it had been like this on the show - would have made a much better episode.

Love the whole story and Ronon was amazing. Poor John. You whumped him wonderfully :)

Thanks!

[coolbreeze1]

Thank you!! There was so much depth to the material on Inquisition that I would have loved to have seen play out on screen. Glad you enjoyed my version of it! :D

[lcshepp]

Wonderful angsty story. Tucked into my Kindle!

One of my fears since the series has ended that fanfic will slowly disappear. Thanks for keeping those fears at bay.

[coolbreeze1]

Thank you! I have a few more stories in mind, so don't worry! I'm not going anywhere yet... :)