Hot Belly

[coolbreeze1]

Title: Hot Belly
Rating: PG13
Warning: Set late season 2, after "Grace Under Pressure"
Word Count: 8,400
Summary: It's a jumper crash story! But mostly it's the team being all teamy together trying to get out of the crashed jumper.

A/N: When I can't fall asleep at night, I dream up stargate stories. I came up with this one and still remembered

Comments

[roo1965]

Ha, i've been watching your nano writing count and been envious- but so happy that we get fic out of it! I love the twist this time that they are all in the jumper underwater. At least it's not too deep so they can swim out- a nice touch and not something i've seen before. Liked that ronon was medically able and how slightly off balance john felt about that. The perennial quiz about Super powers was funny and a nice touch. Also really loved the poker game at the end with john trying to fake his team out and then the idea of them all watching Silence of the Lambs! eee- great stuff.

[coolbreeze1]

Thanks!! I've got another story finished that needs another edit, then I'll post it. I enjoyed writing this story a lot - gave me a chance to self-indulge a little in some nice team bonding. Glad you enjoyed it!

[indielynne]

Fabulous story, always love a good team tale, especially when it involves Sheppard whump. You are a master at engaging your readers and as always I was sorry to come to the end of the story. But I just went back to the top and read it one more time!

[coolbreeze1]

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it! I had fun with this one, letting them work together as a team to survive but also just be together and enjoy each others' company.

[jimpage363]

Awesome team -- all working together and a solid unit, no cracks.

[coolbreeze1]

Thanks!

[sgafan]

That was such great team interaction, the voices and characterizations were right on :D

I loved Medical!Ronon! That’s awesome! And it totally fit the way you wrote him and his interaction with Sheppard. In fact, I think I liked the Sheppard and Ronon interactions the best but it was all good.

Great job :D

[coolbreeze1]

Thanks! Most of this story came to me in chunks of conversation, and most of the conversation was around inane things like super powers. The jumper crash was just an excuse to stick them in a small space together and just be "The Team."

Smart Ronon is my favorite! I love giving him chances and plausible scenarios where he gets to demonstrate his competence in more than just fighting. I think I enjoyed that aspect of this story the most. Thanks for reading!

[sgafan]

oh definitely! I Love writing Ronon as more of a 3 dimensional character and not someone that just grunts a lot and shoots things. ;)

Really enjoyed it :D

[sherry57]

Jumper crash, Shep whump, team caring for each other......so many of my favourite things packed into your story hon...thanks sooo much. I really enjoyed this.
Wonderful story...keeping safely to read again at will!

[coolbreeze1]

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it! I just wanted the team together being all teamy and working together and enjoying each others' company while they were at it.