Hot Belly

Nov 17, 2011 09:45

Title: Hot Belly
Rating: PG13
Warning: Set late season 2, after "Grace Under Pressure"
Word Count: 8,400
Summary: It's a jumper crash story! But mostly it's the team being all teamy together trying to get out of the crashed jumper.

A/N: When I can't fall asleep at night, I dream up stargate stories. I came up with this one and still remembered ( Read more... )

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titan5 November 23 2011, 15:59:53 UTC
Loved the team factor! Also loved Rodney typing on his imaginary laptop, doctor Ronon, and the continuing discussion on super powers. Thanks for cheering me up!

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coolbreeze1 November 26 2011, 20:39:10 UTC
Thanks! This was all just an excuse to get the team stuck together, talking and working and being teammates. Glad to cheer you up anytime! :)

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dernhelm62 December 10 2011, 19:14:25 UTC
I love Jumper crashes! Especially when Sheppard is whumped. What can I say, I'm shallow that way. Keep'em coming and I'll keep loving them! Thanks! :)

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coolbreeze1 December 12 2011, 17:58:45 UTC
Glad you liked it! There are never enough jumper crash stories! :)

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anonymous October 6 2012, 05:26:36 UTC
Another great story. I think you like trying to drown John, you were do it in the story I read. It was also good to see the follow on from that one with Teyla and Ronan knowing first aid skills. The fact that they should learn some was mentioned at the end of that earlier fic.
Loved it Thankyou!

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coolbreeze1 October 7 2012, 02:07:39 UTC
Thanks! :) This one and the other other drowning story were part of my 50,000 words of SGA last year. The other story was a prompt from someone else from months earlier, and this story started of just as a jumper crash one. I guess I didn't intend to nearly drown Sheppard twice in stories posted so closely together! I did like the opportunity to have Ronon show some of his intelligence in this one with his newly acquired first aid skills. Thanks for the comment!

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