My College Essay.

[coootercake]

I am having problems of what to do with the end of my essay. Its very confusing. Soo i am asking for you guys for help. But before you read this, I do not have any kind of feeling of Suicide, abuse or anything like that, it is 100% false.  My teacher wanted something that is jaw droping so i am giving it to her. It is a Fiction. So yeah don't think

Comments

[jennandalyssa]

this doesnt really make sense? what exactly is this for? do not do anything important with this until you talk to me

[thatcurlyblonde]

zach i love you. with that being said there are multiple grammatical errors, contractions, misued words, mixed meaing (did the dad commit suicide or not), cuss words (not in papers zach!), and yeah we need to work on it. please do not send this in. i strongly advise rewriting it!

[rachaelem]

i didnt get to read it all yet, but its Tunica...i think, idk, when you are done ill do a grammar check for you if you like?

[speedy_6969]

ditto with what they said. What is the paper for?

[coootercake]

compostion 1