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The Ripper

Oct 15, 2013 23:01

Title: The Ripper
Rating: PG
Pairing: Tao/Kai
Word Count: 6449
A/N: Some aspects of this story inspired by Holly Black's White Cat and the movie Dhoom 2. Title inspired by Vampire Diaries lol.
Disclaimer: This is not a vampire fic.

( They call him the Ripper. Kai secretly thinks that it’s the most inaccurate name they could have come up with. )

pairing: tao/kai, length: oneshot, genre: action/adventure

Comments 9

hipployta October 16 2013, 03:38:52 UTC

Aww...of course BigBrother!Kris would feel guilty and want to protect his xiao didi Tao...

And wow Tao snatching Jongin from the Korean government while you're at it...awesome

I'm surprised those assholes didn't think what would happen if Jongin REALLY didn't appreciate being forced to be an assassin.

coppermist October 18 2013, 00:09:50 UTC

yeah I enjoyed writing bamf!Tao lol

oh_tea_twelve October 16 2013, 09:34:56 UTC

HOMG HOMG THISSSS♥

“Remember, Taozi?”
“Wherever you go, I can fly and meet you there.” ---> awwwh~

it was really sweet that kris decided to cover zitao, way to go gege ¦:3

it was really sad that jongin was taken from his family, stripped off his freedom and his childhood and the fact that he carried crong with him everywhere proves how lonely he was and how much of a big kid he still is inside >¦:<

all along they were each other's target and just everything went smoothly after (sorta) and jongin getting all attached to zitao in a short span of time c::
i love the ending! ¦:DDD

ugh i suck at commenting to do this story any justice :c
THANKS A WHOLE BUNCH FOR THIS GAAH MADE MY DAY C:
<3<3<3
/throws skittles and broccolis/ ♥

coppermist October 18 2013, 00:07:40 UTC

omfg. i'm glad you liked it! :D

zitaos18 October 17 2013, 00:25:02 UTC

I honestly love this, i love how you portrayed Tao and Kai.
Thank you for this <3

coppermist October 18 2013, 00:08:22 UTC

thank you! :)

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coppermist October 29 2013, 03:24:15 UTC

thanks for reading, I'm glad you liked it! ^.^

1beinghated November 2 2013, 16:31:59 UTC

the taoris shipper in me is so happy now XD

anyways, I reaaaalllyyyy like this fic. though the ending's... leaves me hanging a bit, I liked it. :)) woohooo~

and the whole big eyes kyungsoo and that smiley one who controls water HAHA well done.

also, tao's guilty pleasure differs so much from jongin's (watches vs. cars) omg I just- yes, you've done well hahaa

and oooo back story on Taaooooo~ how sweet.

(and ik ik ik, taokai fic, ik, but you make me wanna write '“Remember, Taozi? Wherever you go, I can fly and meet you there."' everywhere. like in my notebook, on the wall ;A;)

oh oh and I loved how you didn't cram the rest of EXO in here. well done author-nim~

coppermist December 20 2013, 05:11:00 UTC

omg I'm sorry I took so long to reply to this! (like over a month that is just sad TT_TT)
but thank you so much! <3
yeah the "guilty pleasures" were supposed to just be like extravagant, expensive cars, expensive watches. and then conveniently ended up reflecting their powers - Tao's with time and Kai's with transportation
and lol go for it, write it everywhere, SPREAD THE WORD
:P