Comments | coquette7: Pain on Pain -- Chapter Four

coquette7

Pain on Pain -- Chapter Four

Jul 29, 2009 17:54

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pain on pain, edward/bella

Comments 35

cchellezz July 30 2009, 04:18:47 UTC

Oops! Some how I missed that you were posting a new fan fic. I'll have to catch up tomorrow! :D

riveroad July 30 2009, 04:19:29 UTC

Nothing I love more than a Bella with a backbone. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this :)

demosthenes91 July 30 2009, 05:35:52 UTC

Honestly, I don't know who I love more in this chapter - Alice or Charlie. They're both fan-frickin'-tastic.

“Well, unless you made him cry, then kicked him square in the balls while he was groveling, it wasn’t nearly good enough.”

I know I'm evil, but GO CHARLIE! And key his car for good measure - no reprieve for the family jewels!

brokenrecord83 July 30 2009, 05:45:46 UTC

looooooooooooove it

(: colorblindeye July 30 2009, 07:20:21 UTC

charlie and alice.
need i say more?
made me giggle.
I think the score is still in Bella's favor and thank you so much for that!
update soon or i'll die of deprivation.