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coquette7

Pain on Pain -- Epilogue

Aug 10, 2009 07:19

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pain on pain, edward/bella

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coquette7 August 13 2009, 15:29:20 UTC

Aww, thanks hon. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :)

Thanks for the review!

singnovember August 10 2009, 15:27:28 UTC

I just woke up and read this, so I won't try to say too much cause it will come out not-very-coherent.

I've really enjoyed this story from beginning to end. Your plotting, characterizations and dialog is all top notch. I'm just going to say it-you're better than Stephenie Meyer at these characters and story.

I think you made the right decision not to include smut. Now, I loves me some smut and your smut is always excellent, but it would not have fitted right with this story. It would have felt tacked-on and wrong. Although I wouldn't say no to reading an outtake of it :D.

Now. I can haz ending to The Small Print? (When you're ready, of course.)

coquette7 August 13 2009, 15:36:10 UTC

Although I wouldn't say no to reading an outtake of it :D.

I'll definitely recycle the smut I wrote and put it in another story. :)

Now. I can haz ending to The Small Print? (When you're ready, of course.)

But of course, my dear! :) I'm not certain yet how long it's going to end up, but I am still writing the story.

Thanks for reviewing!

ultimatecozzie August 10 2009, 15:28:47 UTC

Epilogue was soooo sweet and cute. Love It

And yes, up until the end I was convinced there was going to be some E/B porn and I was thinking to myself, "should I really be reading this at work O.o!?!?"

haha, c'est magnifique!

coquette7 August 13 2009, 15:37:54 UTC

"should I really be reading this at work O.o!?!?"

lol ... in general, when speaking of my fic, the answer to that question is NO. ;D

Thanks for reviewing, hon!

hayley_cullen August 10 2009, 15:54:15 UTC

Oh a brilliant way to end it! I am glad too that there was so E/B porn, although I was confinced it was going to happen! I agree with the first comment that it just wouldn't have felt right.

Brilliant, as always! *Sigh* What am I going to do with my time now?

coquette7 August 13 2009, 15:39:05 UTC

What am I going to do with my time now?

I posted part of a new(but old) story last night if you're intereted. :)

Thanks for reviewing!

door August 10 2009, 18:15:39 UTC

Gorgeous ending. I think this was perfect. Their issue in this story was more about regaining true intimacy, anyway. Which they did, no sex required.

coquette7 August 13 2009, 15:39:57 UTC

Thanks, sweetie :)

*big hugs*