I really like the chapter. I liked seeing everyone getting protective of Edward, especially Bella. I like the role-switch. You write the best Charlie. I love him in all your fics and this is no exception. I'm glad you're going to be updating regularly again! I missed humanward, he's so cute!
...just a warning: i might kiss you for this. i seriously got an im from a friend saying "OMG THE SMALL PRINT UPDATED", and usually i don't know what the hell people are talking about when they talk fanfic because i don't read fic much (all human isn't my thing..) so take it as a compliment when i say i reread yours often.
i've never reviewed a fic of yours before (my bad!) but trust me, i love them. i love the interaction, the conversations, the descriptions. this is the fic i've reread a good many times because it just strikes me as so bella, even if it's au and paving its own path. i love your bella voice, it's just lovely.
now don't you dare make me wait until 2010 for an update. like bella said: evil.
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But you totally made up for everything with the Emmett/Jasper on the porch.
“He smelled like raisins, Jasper. Do you know what else smells like raisins? Pee. That’s what.”
That is the best thing I've ever read/heard.
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I need to reread everything before coming back to this chapter. =/
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I am almost tempted to say I want to read this more than your all human bi-porn, but I'm torn...
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i've never reviewed a fic of yours before (my bad!) but trust me, i love them. i love the interaction, the conversations, the descriptions. this is the fic i've reread a good many times because it just strikes me as so bella, even if it's au and paving its own path. i love your bella voice, it's just lovely.
now don't you dare make me wait until 2010 for an update. like bella said: evil.
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