Summary: Written for the Fandom Gives Back charity auction. After Bella is turned into a vampire, her perfect marriage to Edward falls apart. But as time passes, their eyes begin to clear and their paths realign. Complete.
So now that I'm not helping I can point out the things that I secretly fangirled over:
- The opening scene. I LOVE it so much. - Your Rosalie. So fantastic. - “You’re not the only person that lost their spouse nine months ago, Edward.” I might have told you this already, but I adore this line so much. It was like being punched in the gut, but in a good way :) - The whole last part. I love your Edward voice a lot a lot a lot.
I loved the Edward voice! I thought it would be Bella cuz I saw a tweet you wrote about your Bella voice, but I was pleasantly surprised.
I like how Edward starts out being so absorbed in his own thoughts, guilt, and self-pity that he's almost completely oblivious to what Bella is actually going through.
I really enjoyed the Edward/Alice interaction. I've always liked your Alice.
The symbolism, the way things played out and ended was just perfect.
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- The opening scene. I LOVE it so much.
- Your Rosalie. So fantastic.
- “You’re not the only person that lost their spouse nine months ago, Edward.” I might have told you this already, but I adore this line so much. It was like being punched in the gut, but in a good way :)
- The whole last part. I love your Edward voice a lot a lot a lot.
Love you :)
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I like how Edward starts out being so absorbed in his own thoughts, guilt, and self-pity that he's almost completely oblivious to what Bella is actually going through.
I really enjoyed the Edward/Alice interaction. I've always liked your Alice.
The symbolism, the way things played out and ended was just perfect.
Thanks for volunteering the time to write this!
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