Citizen Erased -- Chapter One

[coquette7]

Summary: Disoriented after her transformation into a vampire, Bella struggles with amnesia. As she learns to control her new powers and abilities, she must also come to terms with what she is ... and with the vampire she doesn’t remember marrying. Bella/Edward.

Rating: R for future chapters. Beginning chapters are PG.

Author’s Note: This

Comments

[tranquie]

omg! so exciting. i have to be the first to comment!

[tranquie]

just finished reading it.
aww sad.

[coquette7]

... and then get sad when you do read it. ;) Sorry! Chapter Two is posted now if you'd like to read it. Take care, and thanks for reviewing!

[coquette7]

lol ... I like how you comment before you even read it. :D

[pinkblossom529]

ohhhhhhhhhh yeaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh

lol. love it. update soon!

[coquette7]

Thank you! Chapter Two is posted now if you'd like to read it. Take care, and thanks for reviewing!

[its_citrine]

oooo i love the ending, i can just hum the 'dun dun dun' to myself lol very dramatic and fitting, love it!

[coquette7]

Thank you! Chapter Two is posted now if you'd like to read it. Take care, and thanks for reviewing!

[thistleandfi]

Okay yes totally hooked :) I was very curious as to how you would approach this new story and am so excited with what you've laid down in this first chapter.

I was really happy to see Bella feel such an immediate pull towards Edward and got a nice giggle out of her jealousy towards Alice. I have this feeling there is more angst and heartache to come (wouldn't be Edward and Bella if there were not) but there's hope too right? *holds on to the meadow vision* ;)

Can't wait for more!

[coquette7]

Thank you! Yes, there's always hope in my stories. I am a sucker for happy, shmoopy endings. ;) Chapter Two is posted now if you'd like to read it. Take care, and thanks for reviewing!

[slowlyforget]

Wow. So exciting!
Write more soon. :)

[coquette7]

Thank you! Chapter Two is posted now if you'd like to read it. Take care, and thanks for reviewing!