Citizen Erased -- Chapter Two

[coquette7]

Summary: Disoriented after her transformation into a vampire, Bella struggles with amnesia. As she learns to control her new powers and abilities, she must also come to terms with what she is ... and with the vampire she doesn’t remember marrying. Bella/Edward.

Previous Installments:

Chapter One

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Citizen Erased
Written by Coquette

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[coquette7]

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[mana1023]

“I’m your husband, Bella,” breathed Edward, head still in his hands. “Where else would I be?”

and

“And to think. I actually held your sweet, warm body close to mine, looked you right in the eyes, and told you everything was going to be okay. You were so frightened. And I did it anyway.”

My heart hurt at those two parts. And you always end it at just the right part. I want to know her thoughts on the journal already. :)

[coquette7]

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[nuits_froides]

Lovely.
I'm becoming addicted to your style of writing.

[coquette7]

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[slowlyforget]

Aww, great chapter.
I really feel sorry for Edward, though.. must be hard. :(

[coquette7]

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[sassybtsweet11]

Omg, i honestly want to tie you to your chair and make you write until the story is finished. LOL.

I loved the first story, but you have to know im utterly fascinated with this one. i hope you update soooooon :O..i might go crazy if you dont lol

[coquette7]

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