Comments | coquette7: Citizen Erased -- Chapters 4 & 5

coquette7

Citizen Erased -- Chapters 4 & 5

Jul 27, 2008 21:59

Summary: Disoriented after her transformation into a vampire, Bella struggles with amnesia. As she learns to control her new powers and abilities, she must also come to terms with what she is ... and with the vampire she doesn’t remember marrying. Bella/Edward.

Previous Installments:

Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three

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Citizen Erased ( Read more... )

edward/bella, citizen erased

Comments 214

mysduende July 28 2008, 05:22:57 UTC

Yay! I was hoping you'd post this weekend. :)

*is off to read*

coquette7 August 11 2008, 01:51:34 UTC

Haha ... I like how you post before you read the story. :) I've just posted chapter six of Citizen Erased if you'd like to continue with the story. Click here Thanks for commenting, and take care!

loveapart July 28 2008, 05:28:35 UTC

Keeping me on the edge of my seat, as always. :) Update soon!

coquette7 August 11 2008, 01:58:39 UTC

I've just posted chapter six of Citizen Erased if you'd like to continue with the story. Click here Thanks for commenting, and take care!

sporkedd July 28 2008, 05:35:43 UTC

is the vampire bella saw out of her window the leader of the ones they ran into in paris?

too much suspense. i can't take it.

i think what edward said to bella about seeing the old bella written all over her was something edward would say in the books. :)

more please! :D

coquette7 July 28 2008, 14:02:26 UTC

is the vampire bella saw out of her window the leader of the ones they ran into in paris?

It most certainly is. :)

coquette7 August 11 2008, 01:59:02 UTC

I've just posted chapter six of Citizen Erased if you'd like to continue with the story. Click here Thanks for commenting, and take care!

sporkedd August 11 2008, 02:00:08 UTC

middle of reading it right now :D

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jeesh July 28 2008, 05:36:52 UTC

OH MY GOSH!!!

KEEP GOING!!!

I knew it was that lead vampire when Bella saw him! I knew it!

You're fantastic!

coquette7 August 11 2008, 01:59:30 UTC

Thank you! :) I've just posted chapter six of Citizen Erased if you'd like to continue with the story. Click here Thanks for commenting, and take care!

papierblumen11 July 28 2008, 05:46:46 UTC

YAY! And CLIFFY!!!! AHHHHHHH! You better keep writing or I will talk to the Mafia!

coquette7 August 11 2008, 01:59:50 UTC

I've just posted chapter six of Citizen Erased if you'd like to continue with the story. Click here Thanks for commenting, and take care!