Yes, Please

[coquette7]

Summary: COMPLETE. One-shot. While out of town, Bella devises a way to finally seduce the ever virtuous Edward - with a little help from an unexpected source.

Time period: Takes place during Eclipse, when Edward takes Bella away for the weekend to see her mother.

Warnings: NC-17 for sexual content.

Comments

[mysduende]

Thanks for helping me take my mind off of ~SPOILER~ temptations. ;)

[coquette7]

Oh, I spoiled myself good. Resist, bb. Resist.

[grimmy23]

Fandom is officially crazy right now.
Awesome story (all of them actually).

[coquette7]

For realz! I'm holding off judgment, I think, until I read the entire story. I'm gonna trust Smeyer to tell the story the way she wants to.

(And thanks!) ;)

[4timesaround]

i'm pretty sure that i might love you.
that rocked so hard core.

sorry bout the earthquake.
i don't trust anything when the earth starts shaking...

[coquette7]

My office building shook good and proper earlier. O_o And it's on rollers so it keeps rocking with every aftershock. It's really rather distracting.

Glad you enjoyed the story! It was fun to write. :)

[4timesaround]

rollers?!

o.0
eek!

[coquette7]

ikr? It's so the building moves when the earth moves. It makes it all seem a lot worse when you're inside, but it helps the building stand up to the earthquake.

[justagimmick]

Phew. *fans self*

[coquette7]

*hands you some water with ice*

[livreid]

Oh my God, this was amazing ! I can just imagine Renée doing that to Bella. I mean, there must a reason why Charlie was so worried to let Edward go with Bella to Phoenix ! That's probably it ! I loved how real it is when you write Bella, you really get her ! And of course, the sex scenes were amazingly hot !

My favourite lines ever :" “Now where did I put those things? Oh, here they are. You should always have these, just in case.” She handed me several foil packets, and I stared down at them in horror. “These are condoms. Have they taught you about these in school?”

Downstairs, Edward howled with laughter."

[coquette7]

Poor Edward. Imagine being that hot and being able to read all the minds around him. And my mother is SO RENEE. O_o She talks to me like that all the time.

[livreid]

I guess it's less embarrassing as you get older. If you already married, it's kinda ok, I mean your mother already knows you're having sex but if like me, you're 20, lives at your parent's house and have your mother discuss how much SHE loves ribbed condoms in front of your boyfriend... Well, that's pretty much mortifying !

[coquette7]

*puts a hand on your shoulder* I know *exactly* what you mean. -_-;;