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Citizen Erased -- Chapter Ten

Jun 06, 2009 12:08

Summary: Disoriented after her transformation into a vampire, Bella struggles with amnesia. As she learns to control her new powers and abilities, she must also come to terms with what she is ... and with the vampire she doesn’t remember marrying. Bella/Edward.

Author’s Note: I apologize for the hiatus. I’ve been writing an original novel, ( Read more... )

edward/bella, citizen erased

Comments 39

slowlyforget June 6 2009, 19:42:22 UTC

So happy to see an update. Looking forward to the epilogue. :)

coquette7 June 19 2009, 16:16:07 UTC

Thank you! :)

hysteria_09 June 6 2009, 19:49:41 UTC

Yay! Update ;)
I love how you kept Edward so perfectly in character, always thinking of Bella before himself.
Can't wait for the epilogue. I have a feeling it's going to be explosive...

coquette7 June 19 2009, 16:16:32 UTC

Thank you for reviewing! :)

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coquette7 June 19 2009, 16:16:52 UTC

Thanks for waiting and being patient with me! :) Sorry for the wait!

sammie_3 June 6 2009, 20:38:55 UTC

oh yay! I love this story!
Can't wait for the epilogue.

coquette7 June 19 2009, 16:17:04 UTC

Thank you for reviewing!

alisa231 June 6 2009, 20:54:00 UTC

It's so nice to see you back.

You've done a wonderful job with the villains in this story. Mikhail and the Volturi are actually somewhat terrifying.

You always do a fantastic job with Edward as well. You really drive home the fact that he would do ANYTHING for Bella and that makes me unbearably happy and sad at the same time.

Thanks for the update. It was a pleasure to read. =)

coquette7 June 19 2009, 16:17:27 UTC

Bad guys are the best to write, imho. :) Glad you enjoyed and thanks for reviewing!