Yes! BELLA HELD HER OWN! Awesome. Although I hope she doesn't catch pneumonia from this little encounter.
I honestly thought that in NM Bella was justified (incredibly stupid, but justified) in breaking any promise to Edward by being reckless, because she never actually owed him anything. After the way he hurt her, why should she have kept a promise to him?
Also I have to say that it seems petty to scold someone for what an illness has done to them. And depression is an illness (that, in Bella especially, really should have been treated). I'm not forgiving Edward any time soon. In fact, I'm really looking forward to any Jake that might show up. :D
Yeah, I felt like Bella was justified in breaking her promise, too. But I didn't like that she did it just to hear Edward's voice. :( And I didn't like that she didn't take care of herself. But other than that ... shyeah, I would have broken my promise, too. ;D
Thanks for commenting and sharing your thoughts! New chapter just posted if you'd like to read. :)
chalice? You must mean Dallas. But I don't recall a Dallas in the series. Hmm...whoever could it be? :P
So...when is Bella gonna slap him for leaving her? Or attempt to? Come on Bella, get over your "I missed him" and get angry that he left you rather than talking everything through with you.
lol, lovely chapter. Edward was deliciously angsty.
Glad you enjoyed the chapter. :) There might be some slapping later ... or at least the metaphorical equivalent thereof. Just posted the new chapter if you'd like to read.
Very intrigued by the fight he's seemed to have with his family and I'm wondering if Emmett and Rosalie bothered to return with the family or if they are living alone once more.
I love the image that your created in the forest. It reminds me very much of the break up scene in reverse, and the the idea of him in front of her, on his knees, holding her and taking in her scent... gorgeous imagry.
It reminds me very much of the break up scene in reverse,
Finally. Someone caught that ... YUUUUS. ;)
Thanks for reading, sweets, and for taking the time to review. (Oh, and for catching that mistake a few chapters back. Whew...) New chapter is up if you're interested. :)
Ah, another wonderful chapter. I don't know how you do it - you just do. Yay for Bella holding her own, I myself would of lost control and started yelling at him. The angst factor was high - but beautiful and I could picture the scene so clearly. You really are such a talented writer, will you hurry up and write your own novels so I can buy them!!!! ::grins:: Sorry, got a little demanding there didn't I? I still think you should though... I've got cookies! I'm not above begging!
Gah, my book is driving me up the wall. I finally just stuck it in the closet and pulled out the fanfiction for a while. They say you have to rest your brain between drafts and work on something else -- so that's what I'm doing. FEELS GUD. I'm way less anal and strict with my grammar and style with fanfiction. Make me want to dance and sing.
Glad you enjoyed the chapter, sweets. Just posted the next one. Thanks so much for reviewing :)
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I honestly thought that in NM Bella was justified (incredibly stupid, but justified) in breaking any promise to Edward by being reckless, because she never actually owed him anything. After the way he hurt her, why should she have kept a promise to him?
Also I have to say that it seems petty to scold someone for what an illness has done to them. And depression is an illness (that, in Bella especially, really should have been treated). I'm not forgiving Edward any time soon. In fact, I'm really looking forward to any Jake that might show up. :D
Another excellent chapter.
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Thanks for commenting and sharing your thoughts! New chapter just posted if you'd like to read. :)
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So...when is Bella gonna slap him for leaving her? Or attempt to? Come on Bella, get over your "I missed him" and get angry that he left you rather than talking everything through with you.
lol, lovely chapter. Edward was deliciously angsty.
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Glad you enjoyed the chapter. :) There might be some slapping later ... or at least the metaphorical equivalent thereof. Just posted the new chapter if you'd like to read.
Thanks for the sweet review!
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Very intrigued by the fight he's seemed to have with his family and I'm wondering if Emmett and Rosalie bothered to return with the family or if they are living alone once more.
I love the image that your created in the forest. It reminds me very much of the break up scene in reverse, and the the idea of him in front of her, on his knees, holding her and taking in her scent... gorgeous imagry.
Edited... because I apparently can't type.
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Finally. Someone caught that ... YUUUUS. ;)
Thanks for reading, sweets, and for taking the time to review. (Oh, and for catching that mistake a few chapters back. Whew...) New chapter is up if you're interested. :)
*hugs*
-coq
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Can't WAIT for another chapter! :D
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Glad you enjoyed the chapter, sweets. Just posted the next one. Thanks so much for reviewing :)
xoxo
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