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Pain on Pain -- Chapter Three

Jul 27, 2009 11:06

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pain on pain, edward/bella

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coquette7 July 30 2009, 01:47:06 UTC

You'll find out in a chapter or two. :) Updated with the new chapter, if you're interested in reading. Thanks for the review!

:) _goldengirl July 28 2009, 03:28:30 UTC

I kinda wanted Bella to punch him in the face. LOL.(I know I know) I just always felt like Bella would have some built up anger over all the months she spent mourning him and just want to deck him one. Just as a WTF where you thinking. lol. IDK. :P
Anyway, great update! Loved it. :) I would imagine Edward's got a lot of work cut out for him before he makes Bella believe in his promise that he'll never leave again.
I can't wait to see what happens when Jacob comes back into the picture. What his & Bella's friendship brings to the dynamic.
Also, can't wait to learn what happened between Edward and the Cullens.
Until Next time.... :)

Re: :) sglitzys July 28 2009, 03:56:18 UTC

I'm thinking Bella should ask Emmett to punch Edward for her. :P

Re: :) _goldengirl July 28 2009, 04:04:49 UTC

LOL yeah, that would work too :)

Re: :) coquette7 July 30 2009, 01:51:16 UTC

Thanks for leaving such a nice review. :) I just posted the next chapter if you'd like to continue reading.

*big hugs*
coquette

sglitzys July 28 2009, 03:59:53 UTC

I really like hearing Bella tell Edward about her pains and how she felt. That way both can start moving forward rather than keeping things bottled up. Can the Cullens smell a hint of werewolves scent on Bella or around the spot where she got attacked?

coquette7 July 30 2009, 01:52:45 UTC

Can the Cullens smell a hint of werewolves scent on Bella or around the spot where she got attacked?

Maybe a little, but I made it pour rain on purpose. :) They'll smell them eventually though. I can't ignore Jacob forever.

New chapter's up if you'd like to read. Thanks for reviewing! I appreciate it!

:) colorblindeye July 28 2009, 04:38:07 UTC

oh man.
edward-0. bella-1.
I like the score :)
if i were bella (although bella, i would think, is too p*ssy to do it), i'd keep
edward groveling. hehehe!

Re: :) coquette7 July 30 2009, 01:54:03 UTC

Oh, she's not done with Edward. (And neither am I bwahahaha!!)

(cough)

:)

Thanks for reviewing, sweets! New chapter is up if you'd like to read.

tree_spirits July 28 2009, 05:15:01 UTC

ILU <33

coquette7 July 30 2009, 01:54:24 UTC

Awww.

I squeed. :)