Clandestine

[corals2252]

The tall woman hid in the shadows of an alleyway near her target. She smoked while waiting for the perfect opportunity to carry out her mission. The blades tucked under her long sleeves were getting colder, and if they had a life, it would be an indication of impatience

Comments

[shyluv87]

Wow...agent Yul vs agent Sica..
Sica is lost..LOL
And I just hope they will have lovey dovey act than fighting or beating each other

[corals2252]

if there would be a part2, then the lovey dovey act would certainly fit right there. lol but im not sure about that yet >

[jeremymyhaven]

Hmm if you had aimed for mysterious, you got that indeed... Questions kept popping up while I was reading... And it turns out I won't get the answers. Hahaha Ah well... I enjoyed the action and the subtle hints here and there of their not so simple rivalry. And the clever Kwon used this complicated thing to her advantage XD A big hand for her. :)
But I did wish for even just a bit more... maybe just a little intimacy which would render one helpless and give the other a chance to escape with the files? LOLZ nevermind me... Thumbs up to you! :D Thanks for sharing!

[corals2252]

yosh! my goal was met afterall! ><

im sorry if this is too open-ended lol it fits the 'mysterious' theme right? haha

yup. kwon is very clever indeed.. but if i were a reader than the author of this story, i'd likely think yuri wouldn't dare hurt Sica. It will be sexytime instead xD

thank you for reading and always commenting! :)
ah.. p.s, you stopped commenting on my short stories thread. lol

[jeremymyhaven]

hehe yeap... It is pretty mysterious. All questions, no answers XD
Hmm Actually, the event that I imagined would happen after this is that Yuri would do something to tease Sica. Then she would leave a confused Sica behind as she ran away with the file she needs... LOLZ nevermind me XD
oww That.. Sorry bout that. I went to hiatus because of review (and is actually still forbidden to read til now LOLZ (pasaway lang hahaha) ) and so I have yet to catch up with all the missed stories. (While trying to find a job XD) But I will comment after catching up...

[corals2252]

hmm that ending is quite possible too! :p oh i thought about another one.. what if they continue fighting and one gets to the vault only to find out the file isn't there? because of that, they'd end up with sexytime so that at least they'd have something accomplished that night? Heeeheeee =)))

ooh. sorry! im not demanding you to comment or sumn. lol i was just wondering why you were suddenly gone. Goodluck with job hunting!!! And yes, just go take your time.. Real life is more impt than ssf or lj anyway xD

P.S I didn't know you were Filo until you said 'pasaway' lol :)

[planet_ac]

Ooh...interesting one!

Hey, I got your pm but was unable to get my reply thru to you...did you set privacy options on your pms or something?
Unfortunately, I know zilch about the moderator queue thingy. It's new to me as well.
Why don't you email the mods at soshipopsmod@gmail.com and find out? It's absurd. Why the need to queue when the amount of fics that get posted each day is negligible?
Hope your post gets through soon. :)

[corals2252]

lol did i disappoint you since it isn't crack? =))

anyway.. lol wat? set the privacy options thing... i don't even lift a finger to modify those ._. since i'm still quite lost when it comes to LJ -_-

Hmm. i'd probably ask them if it doesn't get posted in a week :p thanks for helping me out! :))) >:D< write a yulsic sooon okay??????

[kinetickin31]

osum~~~ haha... i really liked how everything was detailed. and the emotions were still intact.
very mucho gusta~~~

btw, the author for doppleganger is Hurricaneboi

make moar yulsic~~~

[corals2252]

thank you for reading!!! =))

ah. yes. it's hurricaneboi but im not close with him lolz that's why i forgot his name :p