Crappy poem for english

[corehisyomomma]

Alright, we had to write a poem like Emily Dickenson would, so I did. I wrote it in 5 minutes and it sucks ass, but my teacher said it was "wonderful" so I'm just going to post it. I only have my rough draft, it's only half of the poem..when she hands back the paper I'll write the whole thing

Comments

[poopooloo]

it doesn't suck it really is good, it shows that even if you did write it in 5 minutes that you did put thought into it when writing it and did try and make sense with it.

=D

[_false_ideals_]

lol, you need to give yourself more credit, that poem rocks. just thought Id post soemthing as we havnt had the chance to talk for ages, miss you, Love Janeh

[anonymous]

That poem made me cry.