love poem

[corpseus]

i want to watch you breathing

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Amen..

[daemonlord]

I live for the rare moments where nothing is wrong,
Everything brings joy and rapture,
And everything is right in the world.
The moments that never seem to die,
But go on an on, never ending.
Those moments are usually wrapped around a feeling,
Such as love

-Rob Blankenship

...I too await my one to exist. I hope you find yours.

[asktd]

Very very nice. Yellow Dart likes. :)

[deepbutterfly]

That was really beautiful hun...it made me smile...you will find this girl one day and hopefully i will find a guy that inspires me to write something even half as beautiful!

christie

[anonymous]

nice imagery. i like the last two lines. however 1)whether and 2)presence