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Dec 22, 2011 23:47

Title: Touch Me And I'm Going To Scream
Pairing: GRi(JiyongxSeungri)
Rating: R
Genre: angst, romance
Word count: 4638
Summary: Seungri can hear the underlying "Leave me alone. You're annoying. I don't want to see you." in his voice. Seungri ignores the sting in his chest that comes with it.
A/N: written as a remix of vvipforseungri's "Hurricane" for kpop_ficmix 2011 ( Read more... )

pairing: gri, fandom: big bang, rating: r, oneshot

Comments 21

curiousocurious December 23 2011, 09:32:44 UTC

I know this is a one shot but I wish you would write a sequel to this. I really like how you manage to capture their emotions.

corpuscallos_m December 23 2011, 12:02:06 UTC

sorry but I've already exhausted my creative limit for this one. :c

and thanks!!

aishiteru_amie December 23 2011, 11:04:57 UTC

auwww!!
from what i got during gdyb convo, ji did indeed fell in love with ri.
i dunno why, but i feel something.
and it eating ji as well.
but that's me n my gri mind.
would u please do a sequel?
thankyou!

corpuscallos_m December 23 2011, 12:03:14 UTC

that's interesting that you say that since gd is dating top. who knows maybe he does have some extra unwanted feelings~

thank you!

vvipforseungri December 23 2011, 19:52:10 UTC

It's all okay. TBQH I liked reading this more than my original fic xD Thanks for remixing... though I kinda already guessed you had remixed mine anyway!

corpuscallos_m December 24 2011, 06:41:57 UTC

I already knew you were my remixer too. I was told they kept the sign ups open a little longer so another bb person would sign up so I wouldn't have to drop out. also you're so nice for commenting twice. <3

gdontop December 23 2011, 23:30:00 UTC

Oh, this was so good. Poor Seungri; my heart just broke for him. Unrequited love is one of the worst things to have to experience, and you captured the range of emotions that goes along with it very nicely. Great story :)

corpuscallos_m December 24 2011, 06:42:41 UTC

that's good because I've never experienced it myself!! thanks.

ariellm13 December 23 2011, 23:51:35 UTC

This is completely different from the original but I still LOVED this. It hurts but the truth is everybody can't be with the person they love. Still I couldn't help but feel like Jiyong could've been less of a jerk.

corpuscallos_m December 24 2011, 06:44:09 UTC

thank you! and me too tbh. I thought I made him waaaay too mean. but in the original he's so very devoted to seungri and I wanted to make sure he was the complete opposite here. seeimg as it's a remix and all~