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[corriebird]

theatre today was good. very good. well. kinda good. I dont know, I wasn't harmed by it.

all those wanting to read my monolougue I fell in love with months after I wrote it.. click the linkey thing.

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[celestialdebris]

i like the meat of the work
(except mentioning grand theft auto kind of threw me
but then i like it when things are timeless
yet i am obsessed with the 80s do not ask
i am insane)
but the begining and the end rather confused me
maybe it might be helpful to see it preformed
so yeah

[corriebird]

well, the beggining I'm peeling something (and thats an action.) and then the idea was... to be like, alone in the house, so this woman starts talking to an interveiwer... but shes like, talking to herself. and very quickly it becomes not an interveiw, but somethgin shes been thinking about for the past couple days... and shes just now letting herself hear it... but then at the end she realizes shes asking herself impossible questions, and its silly to be talkign like this. and then someone comes in and she has an excuse not to think about it.

that was the idea. but I dont know if that came through? some of it, I agree, might be a little clearer when seen. but I think it needs to be clear enough on paper.

[corriebird]

any suggestions?

and I could change grand theft auto to playstation.

I'm trying to figure this out.