original fiction: and you will hold my heart inside your hand

Apr 01, 2009 21:19

original. pg-13. if she’s being honest, waiting in vain is usually her forte. 1063 words. title from lenka: we will not grow old.
note: written for solitude_82 for challenge #1 at inrevelations. thanks so much to eccentrical and lastupenda for the help and feedback ♥

and you will hold my heart inside your hand

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yourstrulytessa April 2 2009, 01:45:54 UTC
i LOVE this ♥

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corsettes April 2 2009, 04:10:27 UTC
THANKS BB ♥

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round April 2 2009, 02:29:35 UTC
AMAZING BB ♥ ♥

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corsettes April 2 2009, 04:09:59 UTC
TY TY ♥

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nickiunicorn April 2 2009, 04:06:14 UTC
THIS REALLY SHOULD HAVE BEEN SENT TO YOUR BETA FIRST.

buuuuut considering my lack of involvement, it was fairly awesome. devil's in the detailssss lovebucket, and i love the friends reference. because i totally got it.

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corsettes April 2 2009, 04:09:48 UTC
IF MY BETA HADN'T TOTALLY ABANDONED THE THREAD OF LOVE, I MIGHT'VE SENT IT TO HER.

but thank you, your approval means a lot. and i totally knew you'd get the reference. because you're cool like that.

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nickiunicorn April 2 2009, 04:12:34 UTC
okay really? i was ABOUT to check it. and WE NEVER DID THE BIRTHDAY PRESENTS.

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corsettes April 2 2009, 04:14:27 UTC
i don't believe your lies. AND I KNOW, WE FAIL. WE REALLY SHOULD'VE BEEN MORE ~ORGANIZED ABOUT IT. cause really, we are the three laziest people ever.

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loveshaked April 2 2009, 14:39:43 UTC
This is sweet! No lie.

Loneliness spreads like a virus, confidently, slowly, invading your senses like a thief in the night, . It brings you to your knees in the worst way possible; you become victim to those pints of Ben & Jerry’s that you have saved for a rainy day, to those movies that have you reaching for the tissues at the mot inopportune of moments, to those days when getting out of the bed seems pointless- in short, to the syndrome of the pathetically single.

Love, love.

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corsettes April 13 2009, 17:45:25 UTC
thanks soooo much bb <3

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corsettes April 13 2009, 17:45:49 UTC
thanks hun, i'm really glad you liked it <3

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