fic: your spine cracks like a wineglass

[corsettes]

title: your spine cracks like a wineglass
pairing: jasper/bella (twilight)
word count: 464
spoilers: slight spoilers for twilight and new moon
summary: The room vibrates with the sound of her heartbeat for hours after she’s gone.
author's note: this for my bb evey (lastupenda) who converted me to this ship. merry christmas!!!! thanks to nicki (nickiunicorn) for the beta.

Comments

[boleyn]

I don't know much about this ship as this is my first J/B fic I've ever read, but this is really good. Jasper/Bella is quite intriguing to read, actually, and you did it lovely! You should write more J/B in the future =)

[corsettes]

maybe i will write some, idk, but thanks so much bb <3

[nickiunicorn]

yay! the shattered glass, yesssss.

[corsettes]

lol yes, thanks tons for the beta and advice <3

[nickiunicorn]

anytime, bbcakes. anytime.

[corsettes]

<3333

[xxlucyferxx]

That was absolutely amazing. So evocative and beautifully written...I've never read a J/B fic before, I think you just made me jump ship. Gorgeous! <33

[corsettes]

thanks darling :) and woot woot, another shipper!

[lastupenda]

DFKJSHAKJFHASKJDFKJDFK WTF SHANICE, THIS WAS GORGEOUS.

seriously, bb, this was just beautiful. the words, the sentences, everything was so perfect and just so right and um, please get published?

thank you so so much for this!

[corsettes]

SDFHSLKSJFSKLAHKLDJAF I'M SO HAPPY YOU LIKED IT. I WAS SCARED I'D KILL JASP/BELL FOR YOU.

kay, i'll try. as soon aw we take over the world, i'll blackmail someone into being my agent.

MERRY CHRISTMAS WHORE <3

[theepiccek]

I lovelovelove J/B fic when it's written well - which this is!
For a minute, the only thing he regrets is not striking quickly enough.
The self-loathing that follows isn’t as potent as it used to be. is so true!

[corsettes]

thank you so much darling, oh how you inflate my ego.