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Tossers (a tentacle fic)

Mar 27, 2008 23:14

Tossers -- Star Wars

Hi! New here! Here's a present!

Author’s Notes: Honestly, I don’t think I’ll ever be done with this one. Constant editing and all… Not to mention the ending is about as satisfying as a single Reese’s Cup… Anyway. I guess this can be deleted if it's too much for this community... Read on, reader. Read on. Comments are always ( Read more... )

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pronker March 29 2008, 09:16:49 UTC

"branch out again"

Excellent innuendo and please do climb that trellis again. I liked this, as it a/is action/adventure, not much of that around, b/really rolled along logically/, c/R4 came alive, yay!, and c/it was A/O friendship, too. Good going.

I think there may be some tentacle!fic on M/A, but I don't recall for sure. Anyway, this was good.

silverblood666 March 30 2008, 03:25:14 UTC

Thanks a bunch for the comment. I'm glad you liked it! XD

hlglne March 29 2008, 20:15:53 UTC

You think there would be more tentacles in GFFA, but there's a dearth. One would think the Hutts would encourage such things...

“All right, all right. I was only asking. No need to get technical,” Obi-wan muttered to himself, then he smiled faintly at his little joke. Maybe he’d use that later. This is so Obi-Wan, the humor-challenged...

Only thing puzzling was why he couldn't get into his own room at the end. Had he been somehow 'altered'?

More! Well done! If anyone can handle tentacles it's a prequel Jedi!!

silverblood666 March 30 2008, 03:55:39 UTC

lol thanks for the comment, it made my night. You would think that the Hutts would encourage a bit of tentacle... Hm...

As for him being 'altered', lol, nah... He was just in one of those 'too-tired-to-function' moods.

I toyed with the idea though. Like, Obi-Wan would be able to sense the tentacles through the Force after they got him, but at 3AM, it was too much effort. XD Maybe when I edit it...again...and again... and again... lol

Thanks again for the comment!

sakurafromjapan May 19 2008, 08:12:54 UTC

*Sakura fans herself, blushing* Oh . . . I finally managed to read the fic right from the beginning to the end - straight through ( ... )

sakurafromjapan May 22 2008, 04:17:23 UTC

Eeee!!! Someone read it! Yay! Thank you thank you thank you!! *twitch* And honestly, I thought about both of them with the tentacles. It's smexy. Thanks for reading! *hugs and dances away*

silverblood666 May 22 2008, 04:17:33 UTC

Eeee!!! Someone read it! Yay! Thank you thank you thank you!! *twitch* And honestly, I thought about both of them with the tentacles. It's smexy. Thanks for reading! *hugs and dances away*

sakurafromjapan May 22 2008, 05:02:32 UTC

*hugs back a second before you dance away* :)

Sakura ~ *

pronker September 16 2008, 00:56:09 UTC

Hi, a note to say that I'm reccing your Tossers fic for crack_van this month. It's a well-written and well-paced story and I hope you meander into the GFFA again soon.

random_nexus September 17 2008, 19:58:31 UTC

Read via Crack_Van. I think it's darned good. :)