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Mar 02, 2007 18:15

Attention kids! There is a 4.5 in which Tonks and Ginny plot over chocolate, only it's handwritten in my notebook. You'll have it before part 6! (hopefully tonight :D)

Title: Come Together (5 of ~8)
Author: corvidae9
Rating: R
Word Count: ~4225 this section
Warnings: crackful premises, het/slash/fem, rampant bisexuality
Summary: Hermione has a visitor, ( Read more... )

fic, come together, hpqfac

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bronze_ribbons March 3 2007, 03:11:47 UTC
Giddy interpretative dance entitled "flirting over fluxweed" coming your way after I get some sleep. *flutters eyelashes*

In the meantime -- GLEE!

He also suspected that he had learned to project a spider as his biggest fear, 'cos he'd be damned if boggarts started turning into his dead friends and family, and let people make of it what they would.

I love this. Ron gets too few moments of being psychologically astute in canon or fanon -- nice to see a glimmer of it here.

Avuncular Severus - hee! HEE! I say.

And she does this thing with her--"

*starts giggling again*

"Probably picked that little girl up with his 'wanna see my scars' line? Lame."

*full-force gigglefit*

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corvidae9 March 8 2007, 19:53:13 UTC
OMG I am sooo lame for being so behind on comments. :P Anyway OMGYAY THAAANKYOU I'm sooo glad!! *dances and giggles tooo*

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acromantular March 3 2007, 07:06:11 UTC
Enough of this made me giggle giddily that I can't quote in the comment box! I quite liked the dropping-out-of-a-tree tactic, btw.

But what I really enjoyed was watching your characters settle in- I feel like you're giving a running commentary on real people. The details build the characters nicely, but I really love the flow. Particularly the give-and-take of the collected Weasley family. It has that fluid feel of a large happily neurotic holiday gathering, and feels uncannily familiar. Anyway, I really liked this chapter- it works for me on a fairly deep level of character interaction.

Well, it also works in the neat story cool idea nice description hilarious OMG SQUEEEEE! fashion too, but for some reason this one talks to me.

*totters off to bed*

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corvidae9 March 8 2007, 19:57:27 UTC
Hey Cedric and Draco didn't invent it, they've just attempted to perfect it. :D :D

omg thaaaank you. :D I've done huge family gathering thing for sure and it's hilarious how there are like ten things going on at any one given point in time and then you hit this point at which you're like HELP ME PLEASE. *slinks off for quiet* ...aaaand then half the time, you come back after a while because you love them and their crazy.



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merrycontrary March 3 2007, 09:13:37 UTC
If you were here right now, I would be clutching at your shirt sleeve and waving wildly at the screen while babbling about all the bits I loved.

Just on the interpersonal level, there is:
Bill and Kingsley from best friends to true love
Charlie/Pansy
Pansy and Draco, BFF
Snape looking out for Draco
Snape taking care of Remus, behind Remus' back
Percy/Luna
FrednGeorge
Ron/Draco
Ginny looking out for Ron
Hermione gossiping
Peter with his face in Lily's cleavage
Sirius' kamikaze negotiation style
Weasleys everywhere you look
the feel of a big family dinner

Also, this line: he didn't know that he could handle anything other than something he could play.

I need to hunt down some of those old Bill icons now. Pansy too. And Charlie. And Luna. Ah hell, who needs sleep anyway?

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corvidae9 March 8 2007, 19:59:13 UTC
Biiiiiill/Kingsley = ♥!

Sleep is for the less dedicated. :D

*omgloves*

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merrycontrary March 8 2007, 20:23:05 UTC
Sleep is for the less dedicated

And also those whose procrastination is bordering upon denial.

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marginaliana March 3 2007, 17:50:18 UTC
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeee! Best chapter yet, I think. I always love seeing Draco being unexpectedly honest without thinking about it, and happy but bizarre Weasleys... lovely!

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corvidae9 March 8 2007, 20:00:24 UTC
OMG thank you!! I love how the family night turned out, too, but throwing poor Draco in and leaving him to his own devices was just cruel. :D <33333

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elucreh March 4 2007, 09:12:31 UTC
PERCY!!!! OMG, I'm so PROUD of hiiiimmmmmm!!!

And Hermione making excuses for gossip in her head is hilarious.

Peter face-planting on Lily? I want fanart of that, so I can laugh for the rest of my life just by looking up at the wall.

Severus and his wolfsbane improving. *cuddles him* *smiles dotingly when he struggles* *ruffles his hair and pushes him into Remus's lap*

And his letter to Draco was fabulous.

Bill being allowed to be taller than Ron was just...endearing and heartbreaking and heartmelting all at once.

The big Weasley interactions are so fabulous, one big happy annoying group...if you weren't raised in a big family--and even if you were--allow me to congratulate you for conveying the sense of it so well.

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corvidae9 March 8 2007, 20:01:46 UTC
PERCY YES. He's so made of awesome.... deep down. :D

Dude, I so want fanart of Peter's faceplant, too. The visual just makes me giggle.

Thaaaaank you honey. ♥♥

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