Attention kids! There is a 4.5 in which Tonks and Ginny plot over chocolate, only it's handwritten in my notebook. You'll have it before part 6! (hopefully tonight :D)
Title: Come Together (5 of ~8)
Author:
corvidae9Rating: R
Word Count: ~4225 this section
Warnings: crackful premises, het/slash/fem, rampant bisexuality
Summary: Hermione has a visitor,
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In the meantime -- GLEE!
He also suspected that he had learned to project a spider as his biggest fear, 'cos he'd be damned if boggarts started turning into his dead friends and family, and let people make of it what they would.
I love this. Ron gets too few moments of being psychologically astute in canon or fanon -- nice to see a glimmer of it here.
Avuncular Severus - hee! HEE! I say.
And she does this thing with her--"
*starts giggling again*
"Probably picked that little girl up with his 'wanna see my scars' line? Lame."
*full-force gigglefit*
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But what I really enjoyed was watching your characters settle in- I feel like you're giving a running commentary on real people. The details build the characters nicely, but I really love the flow. Particularly the give-and-take of the collected Weasley family. It has that fluid feel of a large happily neurotic holiday gathering, and feels uncannily familiar. Anyway, I really liked this chapter- it works for me on a fairly deep level of character interaction.
Well, it also works in the neat story cool idea nice description hilarious OMG SQUEEEEE! fashion too, but for some reason this one talks to me.
*totters off to bed*
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omg thaaaank you. :D I've done huge family gathering thing for sure and it's hilarious how there are like ten things going on at any one given point in time and then you hit this point at which you're like HELP ME PLEASE. *slinks off for quiet* ...aaaand then half the time, you come back after a while because you love them and their crazy.
♥
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Just on the interpersonal level, there is:
Bill and Kingsley from best friends to true love
Charlie/Pansy
Pansy and Draco, BFF
Snape looking out for Draco
Snape taking care of Remus, behind Remus' back
Percy/Luna
FrednGeorge
Ron/Draco
Ginny looking out for Ron
Hermione gossiping
Peter with his face in Lily's cleavage
Sirius' kamikaze negotiation style
Weasleys everywhere you look
the feel of a big family dinner
Also, this line: he didn't know that he could handle anything other than something he could play.
I need to hunt down some of those old Bill icons now. Pansy too. And Charlie. And Luna. Ah hell, who needs sleep anyway?
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Sleep is for the less dedicated. :D
*omgloves*
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And also those whose procrastination is bordering upon denial.
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And Hermione making excuses for gossip in her head is hilarious.
Peter face-planting on Lily? I want fanart of that, so I can laugh for the rest of my life just by looking up at the wall.
Severus and his wolfsbane improving. *cuddles him* *smiles dotingly when he struggles* *ruffles his hair and pushes him into Remus's lap*
And his letter to Draco was fabulous.
Bill being allowed to be taller than Ron was just...endearing and heartbreaking and heartmelting all at once.
The big Weasley interactions are so fabulous, one big happy annoying group...if you weren't raised in a big family--and even if you were--allow me to congratulate you for conveying the sense of it so well.
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Dude, I so want fanart of Peter's faceplant, too. The visual just makes me giggle.
Thaaaaank you honey. ♥♥
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