Time is too swift for those who fear

Jun 12, 2010 03:05

Title: Time Waits for Nothing
Author: corvus_noir 
Film prompt: 13 going on 30
Pairing: Merlin/Arthur (Arthur/Sophia)
Rating: PG-13
Warnings/spoilers: AU, S2 character spoilers, OOC (not main-characters)

Author’s Notes: Thanks to M who was an absolute DOLL and betaed this for me, all remaining mistakes are mine. Also GIANT thanks to i_claudia who poked me repeatedly ( Read more... )

m/a, fic, merlin, hooray for being on time!, reel_merlin

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a8c_sock June 13 2010, 19:49:25 UTC
Awwww this was so sweet. Yay for Arthur for figuring out Merlin was what he wanted.

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corvus_noir June 17 2010, 06:39:30 UTC
Hooray Arthur! Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!

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aleluna187 June 14 2010, 16:19:57 UTC
Loved it ! &hearts

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corvus_noir June 17 2010, 06:39:53 UTC
I'm so glad! Thank you!

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corvus_noir July 1 2010, 03:40:09 UTC
PS: I LOVE YOUR ICON!

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frames_in_aria June 19 2010, 23:23:32 UTC
Awwww, that's so cute ♥

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corvus_noir July 1 2010, 03:40:52 UTC
Thanks! I am glad you liked it!

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alba17 July 3 2010, 03:43:37 UTC
This is really sweet. I like how Arthur's motivation as an adult was just to get Merlin back to his normal self, to see him laugh, etc. Nice job.

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corvus_noir July 24 2010, 19:00:46 UTC
I'm happy that's the part you liked, and that it came across as being the most important motivation for Arthur. Thank you for reading!

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brunettepet July 21 2010, 16:52:44 UTC
That was lovely. Arthur's reaction to Merlin's heartfelt gift was shattering and wholly adolescent. I enjoyed seeing his life 17 years into the future, seemingly perfect until Merlin shows up and Arthur discovers it's not perfect without Merlin's friendship.

I enjoyed 13 year old Arthur pursuing Merlin and coming to grips with feelings he didn't even know he was harboring.

I love the way it turned back to the moment that ruined everything between Arthur and Merlin and Arthur was able to fix the rift before it happened. Nice job.

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corvus_noir July 24 2010, 19:05:53 UTC
I am so very glad you liked it! Thank you for your wonderful comment, I am glad the pure adolescence came across in Arthur and they way he responded. It is so nice to hear the parts people liked! Thank you!

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