Some Random Thing I Wrote

[coryjude]

I saw you there.
I saw hope in the clouds
and i was taken back
to everything fair.
I was sustained for a while,
but i was taken back.
I saw myself
Saw what u had to give
Saw what i had to sell.
I criticized myself
Criticized this life that we live.
Knew what i had to sell.
I saw hope in the clouds,
but today the sky fell.

Comments

[useless_excuses]

I like that =)

[bijin]

you are god

well maynard is god.

but you are definitely next in line

[coryjude]

thanks :D i wrote it in english class. maybe if i wasnt writing shit in english i wouldve got better than a c. lol