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[cosette7]

Question:

For those who know what I'm talking about...do you think it would be just as well to have the Thorvald-Nils thing revealed early on? My writing class was really confused by it and I wonder if I should just show what's going on earlier instead of waiting.

Or, rewrite and let it be a surprise for later in the book. What do you think?

Comments

[rockymento]

I don't know...it took me awhile and I told you I thought he was so many things until I got to the multi personality thing...I don't know. For along time I thought he was the epitomy of Narcissistic, didn't I...or was it Bi Polar. I forget.