[CHAPTERFIC] You Can't Take the Sky From Me Chapter Eleven (Axis Powers Hetalia)

[cosmic_dare]

Title: You Can't Take the Sky From Me [FF.NET Chapter Eleven] [ Writing Journal Previous Chapters ]
Pairing: AmericaxEngland, PolandxLithuania, GermanyxItaly, SpainxRomano. Future pairings: GreecexJapan, HungaryxAustria, SwedenxFinland, Belarus--->Russia
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance/Humor/Drama/Action+Adventure/Alternate Universe
Word Count: 2,

Comments

[midori_lover]

France's words may be laced with innuendo but they sure are wise. XD
Yay an update! Thanks! X3

[haro]

I figure France is pretty darn worldy-wise. Thanks!

[0phiomancer]

Aw, England has it baaaad. And it's nice to see America becoming less of a tool as the story progresses. As usual, I love the inclusion and fleshing out of side characters. America's phone call to Italy made me happy.

I shall await the next installment with great enthusiasm ♥

[haro]

Thanks a lot! And yes, I'm really enjoying working with America's character progression, having him come into his own.

[haro]

Oh yay! I put lots of him in the next chapter as well. I really enjoy writing France, so I'm glad he works well for you.

[socialholic]

Aadslfakjds quick updates <3 ! LOVE YOU ! I still have to comment the last chapter as well, but this first!

Oh god, England is probably the most cute thing in the world in this fondness and thinking about America all the time-- he's just bloody adorable! <3 But poor him, having to endure everyone's *coughPrussia'scough* tauntings about America :'D he'll probably explode at some point if that goes on.

And Italy awww ;o; so worried! So cute, love how Italy's so innocent.

AND FRANCE YOU'RE NOT INNOCENT AT ALL :'DDD. So nice to see him and Japan too again! And just remembered that didn't England know France (which means France also knows England) and England recalling the history of his hat and OH GOD all these mysteries are driving me crazy! Can't wait to know something more about England's past @u@! Really looking forward to it!

But great chapter, again! ;;u;; Love your work so much, these updates always get me so enthusiastic and into a good mood! Thank you so much!

[haro]

Your comments are always such love.

I'm glad you're enjoying England, because I'm really enjoying writing him. He is just so, so damned cute. And I won't deny that he will probably explode.

Italy is a sweetie.

NO FRANCE IS NOT. Yeah I'm trying to drop a lot of hints and foreshadowing as to those mysteries, but I promise it will all come together in the end!

Thank you!

[jessiepuppy]

I would just like to let you know that is is my ALL TIME favorite fic. I love it so much. I can't even-- it's just-- guh.

I started reading around chapter 8, and printed out all of the chapters. I read them at school and showed my friends. My god, I could not focus in class at all around that time. xDDD
(lol i sounds almost stalkerish but whatever;; )

Though school is out, I still continue to print out the chapters when they come out. After of course giggling like mad and jumping up and down in my chair.

Just thought I'd let you know how AMAZING YOU ARE and how much I love this story, with all it's awkward moments and kick-ass fighting scenes. ;A; ♥♥♥

[haro]

I would just like to let you know that is is my ALL TIME favorite fic. I love it so much. I can't even-- it's just-- guh.

....Guh. *blush* I'm SO GLAD you love the fic so much, and you print it out? W-wow. ;_; *is very flattered*

Thank you, thank you so much. ♥