[CHAPTERFIC] You Can't Take the Sky From Me Chapter Twelve (Axis Powers Hetalia)

[cosmic_dare]

Title: You Can't Take the Sky From Me [FF.NET Chapter Twelve] [ Writing Journal Previous Chapters ]
Pairing: AmericaxEngland, PolandxLithuania, GermanyxItaly, SpainxRomano, Belarus---->Russia. Future pairings: GreecexJapan, HungaryxAustria, SwedenxFinland
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance/Humor/Drama/Action+Adventure/Alternate Universe
Word Count: 3.

Comments

[haro]

Thanks a lot! I have a lot of fun writing France, and yes, flustered America is deadly cute.

That's actually been a bit of a struggle in planning the story (balancing the cast), so I'm super pleased that it's working well for you.

[whaleabc]

Let me begin this by saying that I've never been a US/UK fan. Never. *is shot*

But I'll have to admit that I have this series bookmarked. I love how everyone in the story has a role to play, and I really, really like your France (just the perfect balance between flirtatiousness and wisdom).

The pace in the first scene is handled very well - you showed how creepy Russia is, and how oppressed his officers are (man, I love your Estonia as well!). Was it bad that I felt sorry for Belarus? Poor Ukraine, Latvia and Lithuania (I wonder how/why they joined in the first place?)

Keep up the good work!

[haro]

I'm excited that you can enjoy the story even though you're not a fan of the main pairing. That means a lot!

And yeah, as much as I love the leads, I really adore the side cast so I want them all to have a fairly meaty role to place. I enjoy writing France, so I'm glad you like him.

As for the first scene, I was pretty worried about it (Russia hasn't appeared for several chapters, so I hadn't written him in a while), so yay for that. And feeling sorry for Belarus? So do I, actually. XD

[sortika]

Oh dear. I've just read all of this through and now I'm hooked. It's like a wonderful mashup of all my favorite things (Hetalia, steampunk, sky pirates) seasoned with a little OTP and served with some SERIOUSLY awesome characterisations. Keep up the awesome, I know I'm watching! :D

[haro]

Oh wow, thanks a lot! I'm glad you took the time to check out the story and ended up liking it a lot. ♥

[shadowgarnet]

This chapter felt so short, but every single bit of it was enjoooooooooyed.

I keep saying this over and over, but I love how you write the interactions between America and England. It's all so flustering and cute to read!

I'm also quite glad to see some Russia, even if it's an evil Russia!

[haro]

Just updated! And yeah actually, it was a tad shorter than some of my previous chapters if I recall.

Thanks so much! They are adorable.

I figured it was time for Russia to put in another appearance. :)

[winku]

AJDFKLAJ~ THIS IS SUCH A LOVELY CHAPTER!

Loved America and England's radio conversation, Canada's brotherly love, and FRANCE!!! OMG FRANCE.

“Eyebrows such as his, I had never seen and hope to never see again.”
I DIED. DIEEEEED. XDDD

Oh god, you made me go back to check your resource post just to make sure it wasn't the Nordics that the Kosmider took out. For a moment there, I thought I felt America's fear. OTL

[haro]

THANK YOU SO MUCH! ♥

France might not love the eyebrows, but I think they're adorable. America totally does as well.

OMG NO I LOVE THE NORDICS TOO MUCH TO... AHHH THE THOUGHT OF IT. *dies* XD