[CHAPTERFIC] You Can't Take the Sky from Me Chapter Twenty-Eight (Axis Powers Hetalia)

[cosmic_dare]

Title: You Can't Take the Sky from Me [FF.NET Chapter Twenty-Eight] [ Writing Journal Previous Chapters ]
Pairing: AmericaxEngland, PolandxLithuania, GermanyxItaly, SpainxRomano, Belarus---->Russia, PrussiaxSwitzerland, GreecexJapan, HungaryxAustria. Future pairings: SwedenxFinland
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance/Humor/Drama/Action+Adventure/

Comments

[nutburger]

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I am so happy to see you updated! Oh poor America...

England did not speak. Instead, without a second thought, he leapt forward and wrapped his arms around America, running his hands down his back and resting his chin on top of his head, as if he was trying to make his body a shield to protect the man he loved from all the harms of the world.

And when America choked out a sob, England tightened his hold, whispering ‘hush, hush it’s all right’ in his ear and using one hand to run his fingers through his soft blonde hair.

And when America’s body began to shake, the sobs wracking his form, England placed his lips on the crown of America’s head and kissed him, soft and kind.

I absolutely love the way you wrote this scene. It's always heartbreaking to see America break down in tears. England was written so well too. He was just so sweet and caring! ;A; I can't wait for more!

And I really want to see what France, Japan, and Canada are planning. I sense something epic coming~

[haro]

Thanks so much for your consistent comments. They always mean a lot!

[emelethaine]

LA RESISTANCE. BRB FANGIRLING.

FRANCE. Just France.

That was a bittersweet (but mostly sweet) one. Had me awwwwing the whole time. ♥
Such a well-written moment, too <3

[haro]

France can be cool too. XDD

Thank you!

[haro]

Thanks!

[starfoxx322]

The fluff! The fluffity fluff-fluff! It's killed my brain and has me grinning like an idiot. The whole scene between America and England was so sweet and well written. It made me smile, in a bittersweet sort of way. Great chapter! X'3

[haro]

I was going for bittersweet, so yay. Thanks a lot!

[doxorz]

;____; America <33333

I BELIEVE YOU!

[haro]

AS YOU SHOULD.

Thanks!