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cosmicanomaly

rebound

Sep 15, 2012 13:20

Title: rebound
Pairing: yoosu (side minsu, one-sided jaechun)
Rating: PG
Genre: Angst/Drama?
Disclaimer: This is fiction.
Summary: a diversion; typically used to avoid the pain of being dumped.
A/N: Special thanks to Melody. I love you.

sequel: real

( He can take what Junsu has to offer, but he never promised him his heart as sacrifice. )

fic, pairing: jaejoong/yoochun, pairing: changmin/junsu, pairing: yoochun/junsu

Comments 38

roughmetal2 September 16 2012, 06:43:46 UTC

gosh, i wanted to cry out of pity for yoochun. first, jae rejected him. then junsu betrayed him. how i hate junsu and changmin for doing it behind his back. i thought junsu truly loved yoochun and was willing to sacrifice for him but i was mistaken. as mentioned, junsu may have been yoochun's second choice but he never lied to him nor hurt him. and changmin, if he wanted junsu, he should have made a move when junsu was still single. this is so painful.

cosmicanomaly September 17 2012, 20:15:53 UTC

Awhh yeah, Yoochun's having a sucky time in this fic. Hopefully he has better luck in real life LOL thank you for reading and commenting! <3

junsu_suie September 16 2012, 15:46:46 UTC

why are ur fic always feel soo depressing? until i can feel the pain of the character is seeping into my bone and make my lung feel like burning and suffocating T______________T

its soooooooo beautiful!!! poor chunnie bcuz he had to experiance the heartbroken feeling in his life. what he had done until he deserve something cruel like that?!?!?! ~>_<~

cosmicanomaly September 17 2012, 20:17:16 UTC

Kukukuuu it's because I'm a sadist. Nah lol angst is just my favorite genre :D. I guess it's not really as much about karma as much as it's just his bad luck - falling for the wrong people. :C

Thank you for reading and commenting!

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cosmicanomaly September 17 2012, 20:21:20 UTC

Ahaha yeah he's not exactly an angel here. :C
(Thank you for reading and commenting!)

joy_twinz September 17 2012, 11:19:03 UTC

I thought junsu truly loves yoochun. poor yoochun. T_T

cosmicanomaly September 17 2012, 20:37:35 UTC

Awwwh. He does love him. He just loves Changmin more =C
<3 thank you for reading and commenting.

kiava_xxx September 17 2012, 17:19:18 UTC

Honey, this was so sad I have no words. I actually think you've outdone yourself this time. The angst just. Ugh.

He tries to swallow the lump in his throat, takes a deep breath - it’s now or never - and opens the door. Junsu, I-

Junsu’s lips separate from Changmin’s with an obscene sound, and Yoochun’s heart stops.

When I read this I actually had to stop, close my eyes, breathe and recollect my thoughts for a moment. You've never been so terrible to the poor Yoochunnie, why now?
But you still had a heavily cynical Junsu and that's you. To be honest, even though it was a one-shot all of your characters seemed to be very well developed. The brotherly-love-don't-misunderstand-but-I-need-you Jaejoong, through the all-knowing Yunho, the wronged-but-also-doing-wrong, confused maknae, to the I'll-always-be-by-your-side-but-love-you-from-afar, mysterious Junsu... and Yoochun, who's in the center of this turmoil, emotional and hurt. How do you do it, Maryam? How?! brb sobbing my lungs out for our crybaby while imagining how he'll woo this ( ... )

cosmicanomaly September 17 2012, 20:50:08 UTC

Lol do you really think this fic is better than the rest? I kinda' just quit after the first 500ish words and then took a month to come back to it. Probably just better thought out 'cause of the hugeass time lapse where I had to think about how I wanted to end the fic whereas normally I rush the ending in like an hour and then just post it.

Lol omg your comment made me flail in the middle of a group meeting - your compliments always put a hugeass grin on my face. It's like somehow you always GET MEEEE. What did you think of the Minsu though 'cause I wanted it to be subtle enough to make the conversation a surprise and then finally smack the reader's kokoro with the kiss scene LOL OTL.

kiava_xxx September 18 2012, 06:28:29 UTC

I think "smack the reader's kokoro" is the most accurate description of what happened to me at that point. ;~;
The MinSu was subtle, but not too subtle- just enough so that the reader can very quickly put two and two together when Yoochun catches them in the act. Like, while I was reading their conversation it seemed to me that Changmin was just worried about Junsu, you know, worried that his hyung is making a mess by having this twisted relationship with Micky. But then the kiss comes and bam!. His words suddenly echoed very differently in my mind. I bet all the readers felt that way ( ... )