real

[cosmicanomaly]

Title: real
Pairing: minsu, side yoosu, hint of yunjae
Rating: pg
Length: oneshot (remix of rebound)
Summary: The pain makes you smile, because it’s there. It’s real. You’re real - even if you don’t exist to him.
A/N: Dedicated to Cristina, whose birthday was yesterday. And thanks a shitload to Andi, Caro and Sanga for helping me out with this. I would

Comments

[waterpulse]

I actually teared up omgg ;AA;

[cosmicanomaly]

JJ chan .. . . ;AA;

[pichiruchi]

poor changmin t-t
why can't you write happy junsu? seriously ;o;

[cosmicanomaly]

HAHAHA HA A IT'S MY MUSE IT'S MY LIFE I DO WHAT I WANT

[pichiruchi]

happy!su is mainly the reason why i just can't read yoosu

But actually I love angsty Junsu as much as i love this....

[shinchul303]

This, and Rebound, are a powerful, very painful pair of windows behind the five's wall of privacy. Ouch!

Very well done; draws on hundreds of canon threads, woven together true.

[cosmicanomaly]

I really wanted to avoid delving too far into canon, but wanted to subtly derive from it as well so I'm really glad you caught on 'cause I tend to go off on tangents when I'm writing LOL. But thank you for reading and commenting! Your insights are always appreciated. :)

[kiava_xxx]

You wrote it! You actually wrote it and I'm so proud of you for deciding to merge the two ideas in one fic!! ;~;
This gives a very, very, very different point of view from the Rebound one and I love it all the more for that. Why? Because it shows that nothing in this world is black or white. Anything that happens is biased when seen from only one person's point of view, which is why I say it's wrong to judge people unless you work in a court room. Not as a janitor that is. This remix, unlike the original story, made me sympathize with Junsu. And dislike Changmin a little, because he comes off as a stubborn little meanie. But in reality he's probably just an insecure teenager who doesn't want to get hurt.
I loved how you made "real" a dictionary quote. And how you changed the centering of the last paragraph. Presentation skills: S! ^^

[cosmicanomaly]

LMFAO MORE LIKE YOU'RE PROUD OF ME FOR BEING LAZY DECIDING TO PUT IT ALL IN ONE WORD DOC?!?! LMAO

Don't dislike Changmin sobssSs it's not his fault the only person he's true to is himself ;n; AND AT LEAST HE DECIDED TO TAKE THE HONEST ROUTE AT THE END - even if it was a totally chaotic time and path but whatever, okay. LOOK AT THEM. JUST LOOK AT THEM. URGH they make me want to claw my brains out.

[kiava_xxx]

Don't claw your brains out! DDDD: How are you gonna come up with amazing stories like this one in the future if you do that??? Although, omg, they are such a picture perfect together *sob*

And I'm proud of you for managing to do this even though you're lazy ^^ *snuggle*

[elvenknight16]

Oh my fucking gosh!!!!!!!
This is akfbdgksdsdh!!!! I don't-even-ugh!

This is perfect. Perfect pain expressed so agonizingly beautiful.
This is absolute perfection in its more purest form. This is wonderful~<3
And I totally adore it :D

Junsu's hurt ;_; just kills me. And the thing with Yoochun, just wow. Baby you're soooo awesome :3
The way you write Junsu, especially Minsu, is marvelous really.

I hope you never stop writing this wonderfully ever!

Take Care sweetie ^_^

[cosmicanomaly]

<333
YOU'RE OVERFLATTERING ME BUT I CAN'T EVEN COMPLAIN BECAUSE IT FEEDS MY EGO SO HARD LOL.

Thank you. Seriously.

I wish there was more Minsu on this planet, but since there's a limited supply, and my mind's overcrowded with stupid plot bunnies, I figure I might as well go make up my own verse LOL. I'm glad it sorta' worked out? :D

[elvenknight16]

OF COURSE I AM!!! YOU'RE WONDERFUL BABY =D
AND YOUR EGO DESERVES ALL THE FLATTERING IT CAN GET x3

Your welcome Sweetie~<3

Same here. Maybe when I get my TVXQ plot bunny back, I'll write you one? Once I'm done with the hundreds of other fanfics and original stories that I keep delaying xP

I'm happy it even ended as Minsu :)
They deserve a happy ending with all the angst you keep writing them in =O