you you you you kiss hey

[cosmicbrownies]

what is this i don't even :(

Kevin/Eli drunk!fic, finished but horribly horribly un-proofread.

i suck at endings, fair warning.

Comments

[biases]

Wow, seriously. I don't know how you did it but you made me interested in U-Kiss dynamics and care about these two guys and hurt, just a little, when Kevin thought back to the drinking game and not having had any experiences to participate with and Eli wanting girls and the penny dropping and then stuff happening that they can't undo but don't know how to stop.

I think you captured the heat of a drunken moment perfectly, and I love that Kevin wants but doesn't want, keeps thinking of consequences and repercussions and, and, love.

Gorgeous work, bb! ♥

[raenism]

i've never really read u-kiss fic before, save for a few one of my friends wrote, but oh my god. i really love this. i'm not sure if you're continuing this or not, but really, i think it's perfectly fine as it is.

i just dnfkdjf i don't know what to say. this is great, okay. believe me ♥

[cosmicbrownies]

awww thank you ;___; I always feel so... incompetent, idk. It's good to get reassurance that maybe I'm not as horrible as I thought.

So were there no sentences that stood out as awkward to you, though? D: There are a few that are niggling at me that I kind of like, but at the same time am not sure that they make sense to someone who didn't write them lol.